Reviewed By:Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 03:52 CDT Comment/Review: Good ending, but the entire thing seemed...hastily written. The story line has a good start and I think I can see where it is going. For the ending alone, I think I would continue reading to the next chapter if there was one.
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