| "In Death, Trust Me, as You Didn't in Life" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2011 13:08 EST
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*sniffle* I'm so sad this is over. It has been a very good story. I'm sorry I couldn't review as much as we'd like. Thanks for making it such a long story and for bringing in Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's children. It really fills out a story. *hugs* And also, thanks for posting here. Have you thought about posting on AO3? I can't really post here anymore, so I'm moving my fics there. I'm sure I'll be re-reading this story again and again for a long time to come. Thanks again for posting. |
Title: brilliant!
Reviewed By: babypye On: June 19, 2011 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear, this chapter was GENIUS. you are extremely smart! it made so much sense, i could see it happening haha. wonderful chapter, and wonderful story! |
Reviewed By: Snowfall1 On: June 19, 2011 13:11 EDT
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Oooh, it's nice that you brought up the mini ice age. I'm sure few people know about that, or know that the temps haven't reached previous high levels since. I like what they're doing with DNA and hope Kagome's time sees a change for the better. I'd like to see that! Yes, yes. Inuyasha's blood will be stable and he won't have to worry about going all beasty? That would be nice. I'm wondering now where Kagome and Sesshoumaru will live, or if they will always travel. Will we get to see the world gradually change? I hope so and can't wait to see what you've imagined. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 20:44 EDT
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That was an excellent bridge chapter. I can see how you are fighting writer's block. You tend to take more advantage of emotional situations. The scene with Inuyasha and his mother was glossed over a bit and you could have milked it for some yum. It was exciting though. I was dreading Sugimi having to leave the boys behind again. Thank you so much for coming up with a way to keep him alive! So much appreciated! Excellent manipulation of Kagome. Great planning. I promise that when I get more meds and they kick in, I'll go back and do some re-reading and more reviewing. Sorry for being such a slacker. I understand about the need to choose writing over responding to reviewers. No biggie. We'd want the chapter more anyway. ^_^ Thanks so much for your very hard work. |
Reviewed By: babypye On: June 13, 2011 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am in love with this story. you are a beautiful and creative writer and i enjoy every minute reading this. you should be proud of yourself its really an amazing fanfic! |
Reviewed By: FireLilli On: May 17, 2011 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Simply WOW. You are an amazing author with so much talent!!! Thank you for hours of fun reading! I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otok((offline)) On: April 08, 2011 11:57 EDT
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woooowww its been about 5 chapeters since I was last able to come to your story and read :) but I am back now and beeming with how awesome I think the progression has been :) Seriously wow. Kagome is certainly going to be a great goddess |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 22:53 EDT
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If this review finally goes through--Yay! You are doing such an awesome job describing the battle scene. The details are awesome. I'm such an action whore. Blood gore, heads detached from bodies, hearts run through, two guys running of to screw to death. That was a funny one. I sure like Nyoko. She's a good match for Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru's mother is a riot. Love her play in battle. Ungai got a deserving end. I liked that, completely unexpected. The thirst for blood you displayed during the battle, the wit of the characters, the glory in death and destruction...it was an amazing portrayal. I loved Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's entrance. Very dramatic and beautifully displayed. Can't wait to see what they do! ^_^ Awesome chapter! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2011 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you get better. Your fanfics are extremely addicting, and I couldn't wish for more from them. I just hope that you, the author of them, will be well enough to update. Lol. Take your time to recuperate and please continue to write awesome updates! I'm a big fan! ;] |
Reviewed By: Snowfall1 On: March 05, 2011 18:07 EST
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I'm sorry to hear about your accident. That's scary. Do you know what caused you to pass out? I hope it can be prevented from happening again. I'm still reading your stories even though I don't review much these days. Gomen |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 31, 2010 10:33 EST
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wow, It has been a while since I came to read this story and you have been busy. so much has happened and the battle is coming.... I cant believe how great this is... well i can believe it but wow its awesome! |
Reviewed By: gahjioa On: December 11, 2010 23:48 EST
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This was a great update.! I can't wait to read more.. Update soon please (Kags521) |
Reviewed By: Tricia1224 (not logged in) On: December 09, 2010 03:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. It is hard to say what specific things I love about it though. I like the depth and character you have given your own characters. This story just overall has a lot of depth to it. Congratulations on winning those awards. Have a great day and Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 19:37 EDT
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This is so exciting! Inupapa is coming back! ^_^ I hope Amaterasu decides to let him stay. I love Inupapa! Poor Sesshoumaru. Your description of what he was doing was awesome. ^_^ That was a very thrilling chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Sosa has no clue what he's dealing with. Moron. Hehehe. Can't wait for the next chappie. Sorry for the crappy review, but I have a terrible migraine because of the smoke from a forest fire near here.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2010 01:47 EDT
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fr1nkl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2010 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aah! Cliffie! Noooooo! And it was getting to a good part... >o! btw, my family also raised a kitten, which we found under a board in our backyard. We named him Tiger. :) Its difficult, but they're so cute. they just falla sleep wherever they are. Best wishes !
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Title: Beautiful, Thank you!
Reviewed By: fr1nkl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2010 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love your scenes with Jaken, and the humor is great! I love this story! You have a great way of storytelling. I can also see other things here, that I think about, such as balance being gone in the modern world. Many compliments and thanks ^_~
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2010 01:37 EDT
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OMG! Gah! I think my brain just broke! They were torn apart? What happened? Maybe I've forgotten something from previous chapters. Anywho, you have me on the edge of my seat! I apologize for my lack reviewing lately, I've been very busy, but I have been keeping up with your stories. ^_^
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Reviewed By: rainstorm61879(NSI) On: September 23, 2010 16:58 EDT
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First apologies for not siging in to write my reviews the last couple months. Love the update I had to hold in my laughter at the tail chasing and half-goddess. Loved that. Great updates can't wait to see Ungai's reaction to what the deserter has to say. Rainstorm61879@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 20:34 EDT
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OMG I'd pay to see Sesshoumaruin in his dog form chase his own tail. I love Noyko she says my puppy and then tortures Inuyasha she's his match and he'll never win. Then Inuyasha tells Sesshoumaru as long as she doesnt say whats under your hakama. LMAO this is to hilarious thanks for a great fic" (^_^)
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Title: hahaha
Reviewed By: Souran-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! I have often thought of that very same thing.. I love you for this chapter. Keep up the great work hun!
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