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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2010 11:12 EST
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one hopes that her power is incompatible with kanryuu --and she overloads and char-broils him. there is a problem with chapter nine? it only has the title when i click on it... =/ ~gin |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 01:34 EDT
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hopefully they are safe and stay that way. i'm wondering if he'll give up if he doesn't find them or if he'll keep searching --and how they're going to get out of the gorge. too bad they didn't at least tell kaoru herself and have her train more in her gifts, she has reason to be upset. ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kenshin & kaoru are safe for now... looks like the truth about kaoru has been told... now misao knows about kaoru and kenshin knows about some things about kaoru now too... how will kenshin & kaoru get to manor?... will tomoe find them?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 23:49 EDT
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the true definition of 'cliffhanger' =D ♣ now kanryuu has a choice to go after the girls or to find and enslave kaoru (i guess the spell hiding her eye color was lost at some point-- hey, i have blue eyes, does that mean i'm 'special' too? =p) ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so they thought of a plan... seems that kaoru has a secret power... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2010 02:38 EDT
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one wonders as to the extent of kaoru's powers/abilities and connections with forces around her. great chapter, very captivating --a cliff --you won't want to miss it! Ù¼
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 03:41 EDT
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if he's part dragon, and she's of dragon slayer blood how do they resolve the problem so that they can fight together without kenshin getting hurt when she draws her blade? --*smirks* looks like kenshin is very 'intrigued' and recognizes that she is just as valuable as the little girls. GREAT STUFF!! ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kenshin has been thinking a lot about who kaoru really is...good that kaoru is awake and recovering... kenshin & kaoru have met and talked but only for a short while... ayame and suzume are sweet & cute... so kenshin will be protecting kaoru... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 20:52 EST
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a connection-- one wonders if the whole will be greater than the sum of it's parts. kenshin and kaoru seem to be quite impressive on their own, but with their powers combined... (LOL --reminds me of 'captain planet') http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VcJI87u3DoQ&NR=1 --really suspenseful, exciting chapter. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 13:40 EST
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i was on edge and excited for this whole chapter! ♥;
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 14:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that tomoe ran into some real trouble... good thing megumi came along to help... looks like they found kaoru... what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Good start!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 19:45 EST
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Enjoying it so far. Interesting use of the characters. So far pretty simple. Might've been truer to the story to have Megumi been used as a pawn in the past? Perhaps helping the bad mage before escaping? Too close? Anyway, just a thought. Good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 02:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things have gotten complicated... what will happen next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 01:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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