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| "Verge of Something Wonderful" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Juniperbreezie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I hope to see it continued.
| Title: Still Great!
Reviewed By: paranoid_freak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so a little more of the story begins to unfold! Kind of sad that Dee and Ryo got interrupted, but I'm very curious as to the story behind the hauntings. Hmm, I wonder. Very nice job, way to build the storyline! Great story, and I'm still loving it! I'll be patiently waiting for more!
| Title: BTW
Reviewed By: paranoid_freak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 05:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah, sorry if it confused you, but I'm still setoaddict, I had just forgotten my name on here was paranoid_freak and that's what it shows when I'm logged in. So yeah, setoaddict or paranoud_freak, that's me.
| Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: paranoid_freak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, back to the haunted house! Aw, sad that Ryo and Dee don't have much time alone in this chapter, especially after the last two, but I do like the haunted house stuff too! Very nice job! Aw, I loved the scene in the car wth Ryo having his hand on Dee's leg. Nice to know he's not trying to clam up and pretend nothing happened. I like Ellen and Lynn too, you've done a great job with their characters. Ugh, I wish I could think of more to say, but it's 5am and my mind is tired. Very good job though, and I can't wait to read more! I'm still loving this fic!
| Title: Very, very nice!
Reviewed By: setoaddict On: April 24, 2010 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, of course I very much enjoyed Dee flipping Ryo over and pleasuring him senseless! That was extremely great and very well done! I can totally see him having that effect on Ryo, everything you described going through Ryo's mind I think seemed just about right. I can also see the fact that Dee wouldn't try and get him to go all the way yet, not unless he was absolutely sure Ryo was completely ready. Very well done! And incredibly hott! I actually have a shortcut to this fic on my desktop to check it quickly every night for new updates! I think this is the only FAKE fic currently being written that hasn't been abandoned, or at least the only good one. So sad that interest in this series has seemed to die down. And yay, I'll be happy to read some more haunted house stuff in the next chapters, that is a very interesting storyline you've got going on. I'll be loyally awaiting the next chapter whenever you can get it done!
| Title: Oh...wow
Reviewed By: Setoaddict On: April 16, 2010 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Hell, that was soo hott! I've been checking for a new chapter every night since I found this story, and I'm soo happy it's here now! Yay! And grr...another cliffhanger. Wow, that was great! I could just imagine the look on Dee's face, and I think it's soo right that he let Ryo do what he wanted and go at his own pace. I can't wait to read more! And damn, I didn't realize until after I left the last one that it was the only review on this here...WTF? Don't people know good stuff when they see it? Well...phooey to them, I'll be happy to read and review the rest of this as you get it posted! I also can't wait to find out about the house, you did a really good job with the haunting stuff. I'm totally loving this story, keep it up please!
| Title: Oh...wow
Reviewed By: setoaddict On: April 04, 2010 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is very good! I'm so very happy to have found such a great FAKE fic, and one with emotional depth! You've kept them so very well in character! I especially loved Ryo's realization that Dee had become 'home' to him. This is just simply wonderful and I must have more! And of course I would find this and read through just to get to that cliffhanger! But, I'll be waiting hopefully for the next chapter!
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