| "My Succubus Wife" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(will log in LATER, silly MM wont let me post when this is my account) On: July 06, 2013 06:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid Spam FILTER!!!! (oh well ratings are good for you.) |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty(will log in LATER, silly MM wont let me post when this is my account) On: July 06, 2013 06:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just writing to let you know they we are all looking forward to more chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty(will log in LATER, silly MM wont let me post when this is my account) On: July 06, 2013 06:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just writing to let you know they we are all looking forward to more chapters!!! |
Title: FINALLY!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2013 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally you updated this story its been forever and i'm glad you did! I can't wait to see whats going to happen next with inuyasha, yumi and kagome! Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: badluv On: June 22, 2011 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your stories they keep me at the edge of my seat.... please please update |
Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2010 00:33 EDT
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You need to update this story! I need to know what happens! Please I need to know what's gonna happen between Inuyasha and Kagome and Ryuu/Naraku not to mention Yumi! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2010 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha was taken over by ryuu/naraku?... looks like he got sango pregnant and kagome poisoned... so kagome doesn't remember what happened to her?... ryuu took yumi to the bad guys?... hope inuyasha gets control back... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: m On: March 18, 2010 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent writing. But ryuu does have a point. kagome's carelesness and indifference, no wonder anyone would want to get out of the marriage. yes i do realize it is the bad guy talking but be realistic. i would be out of the marriage in a heart beat. sango===have some common sense. Overall the story is great. I do love seeing kagome get what she deserves in this situation when puts everything on her husband.
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: March 11, 2010 00:39 EST
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BASTARD>>>Sry had to say it I want to kick Ryuus ass sooooooooooooo bad right now...God I dont know what to say that was super intense and I can only imagine what the next chapter holds...no words here...amazing job but damn...I hope everything is going to be ok
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 14:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so inuyasha agreed but ryuu took control of his body... seems that ryuu took things a bit too far... he wants inuyasha and kagome to split up?... when will inuyasha take control back?... hope soon and what will his reaction be when he finds out what ryuu did?... inuyasha should have told kagome about ryuu being inside him though... never ending problems... will this ever have a happy ending?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: March 09, 2010 18:45 EST
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Amazing chapter once again...I wonder what is going to happen when Kagome finds out about Inuyashas demon...and tomorrow is the ritual and Sango's issue...OMG that is going to be hell Cant wait for the update...super excited for it XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2010 12:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha is still trying to come to terms with everything that has happened to him... and ryuu is always bothering him... i kinda guessed inuyasha might be the father to sango's baby cause naraku kidnapped inuyasha before... all four of them should get together and talk about sango's situation... looks like everyone wants a piece of inuyasha now?... what makes him so special?... lots more drama and action coming i suppose... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that miroku and sango have finally had their talk... good that they've cleared some of their issues... looks like inuyasha and kagome are spending their time together talking and being intimate... nice that they cleared some of their issues too... will miroku & sango tell kagome & inuyasha what's happening with each of them... so sango's not pregnant yet?... who will be the father?... and that dante guy is still alive?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii* On: March 01, 2010 14:44 EST
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Loved the ending...giggled through that conversation...interesting with Dante though...but in a way it makes sense that he would still be alive now that I remember what you wrote in other chapters...and oh boy sango and Miroko...thats a toughy but this was a darn good chapter and I cant wait for the next one...thanks a bunch XD
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: February 24, 2010 09:30 EST
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Absolutely AMAZING! Spent the last two days reading My succubus girlfriend and this and I am so happy I am caught up and cant wait for the next chapter. Very interesting with Ryuu. I was wondering if something was going to happen but wasnt expecting it like that so way to go for suprises and I absolutely loved the sex talk...can totally see it for some reason... XD good stuff so update soon I cant wait XD
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