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Title: um ok
Reviewed By: inuskyeYash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 04:41 EST
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Doggieearlover , Ive been a fan of ur work for a LONG time. But as a member of the GLBT community i really find it offensive . I'm a lesbian , but gay men don't do it with animals only sickos do. Even though this is a work of fiction and its your creativity alone ... i really think you could be more sensitive when it comes to degradation of the gay communtity that loves reading your work so much .
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2010 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man...I know the drama of disloyal and greedy Trustees all too well. I wish I would have had Sesshoumaru in my corner! What a busy day he had today, getting all of his ducks in a row. I like how you revealed that he'd had all of this stuff in the works for some time now, patiently gathering information, secretly buying back his own stock... You definitely can't charge into that kind of a situation without a plan, either situation. I also like how you name-dropped random minor characters from the Canon, like Shiori and Satoru, rather than just completely making up original characters. Those names are already there, may as well use them, right? Ugh...but did you have to say that Jaken looked a little green? I was trying to take the whole thing seriously and then that went and made me laugh, *wink*. I also really liked the brief bit with Kagome waking up and her reaction to everything. I think you kept her reaction, and Inuyasha stumbling through his responses to her, completely in-character for what you have developed as their personalities in this particular universe. I am really looking forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 07:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Sesshomaru was back." :O I love it! Very exciting turn of events! ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 23:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you never cease to amaze. everytime i think, hm maybe she'll stop the story here.. nope. another great chappie. one of the best fics ive read in awhile. definatly the best hentai one hehe
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 00:16 EST
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GAH!!! who else is he going to kill!!!! oh i cant wait for the next chapter! keep up the great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2010 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful new chapter. I liked seeing them back at home, just the three of them. Not that I'm getting sick of the clinic, but a change of scenary every once in a while is a good thing. Wasn't expecting the bit with Naraku, but I loved how you handled things. I'm waiting just like the guys to see how Kagome will react to them once she wakes up. I really loved the final line, "Sesshoumaru was back". Oh boy...watch out world!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2010 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome & inuyasha are spending time together along with sesshoumaru... glad that inuyasha & sesshoumaru were there before naraku did anything else to kagome... liked how inuyasha & sesshoumaru are handling the situation... hope they do get naraku out of the picture... kagome's break down wasn't something they wanted to see... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 00:50 EST
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I have to say I'm really glad to see them heading to a bedroom by themselves. Not that I'm squiked by the animals or the gangbangs, just that it has been stated over and over that they are deeply in love with each other. So far I haven't really seen the evidence for that in this story. Which is why I am happy that they are headed alone to a bedroom. I'm hoping that they will take their time and make love not just fuck. I'm also really glad you had Miroku mention that certain activities would have to cease as her pregnancy progresses. I would imagine that it would be devastating if not relationship destroying for a miscarriage to be caused by a mini horse or being tied to one of the dogs. And lastly I really hope that the baby is Inuyasha's even though I know they would love it just the same if it was Sesshomaru's.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 22:26 EST
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One word... HOT! I really liked this fanfic though I was expecting Kagome's background to be told in flashbacks... it would have been hell of interesting, speaking of which... it would make an awesome story of steamy lemons lol good work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 21:41 EST
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Kagome has more stamina than I ever would have. I wonder what she'll do about Naraku. It sounds as though it may have caused her a bit of trouble. Oooh, do we get to see what Sess and Bank are up to!? That sounds fun. ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that they're enjoying their jobs a lot... nice that kagome is pregnant... is inuyasha the father?... will kagome tell inuyasha about her past though?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 02:15 EST
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UPDATE SOON!!!!! i cant wait to see what happens next :)
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Reviewed By: janey On: January 01, 2010 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. your story is SO hot! i hope you're planning on adding more chapters ;) keep up the good work.
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Title: still a fan
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you never cease to amaze me lol. another great couple of chapters. great imagination or experiences? heh keep up the great writing ;D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting past kagome has... nice that she opened up to miroku about it... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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