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Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it really the end? you had so much going on.. and left undone.. please keep updating.
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Title: are you done?
Reviewed By: obsessedinuyashafan - offline On: February 16, 2010 05:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the transfer between different events and point of views and flashbacks.. was confusing at points. especially when you used the same breakers for kagome's thoughts repetitively for one chapter. im glad you didnt have sango physically raped. and everyones familys survived. although theres been zero mention of miroku having any family other than his cousin inuyasha. i would like to see you further yourself with this story. what will become of sesshomaru and rin? are you going to just FLASH us to when shes older and theyve fully gotten together or leave it forgotten? what of kagura? did naraku dying mean her own death as well? there wasnt much into his other 'spawn' kanna. i'm glad you went so in depth with inu taisho's past. good thinking to end this chapter NOT in a figurative GASP and allow inuyasha to realize they are his children. but what will become of them now? will suikotsu come with them back to the palace and take over as royal healer? did kikyo have any idea what her father onigumo was up to? her reaction when inuyasha asked if she has spoken to him lately was a bit.. suspiscious. but she seems to have been cast as a 'good guy' which i can totally deal with. please update again soon. and please keep in mind my questions and comments. overall loved the story. very creative and orifinal and kept me up til 5am to read it. but dont feel as though it should end yet, if youre up for it. thanks. bai for now.
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Reviewed By: LexiPlexi On: February 14, 2010 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this fanfiction. You have a fantastic talent for expressing the characters' feelings and thoughts without be overly dramatic- just appropriately and believably so. Which is hard to come by in fanficiton writing! lol The concept is great, and I loved reading the chapters with the meeting of the two lovers. Needless to say, I wholly enjoy your story and I can't wait for more :)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 02:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY hope kagomes cancer leaves...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome got a visitor and was saved... looks like inuyasha went into battle with naraku... he went alone?... did inuyasha defeat naraku?... kagome gave birth to twins... and she went out once the barrier was destroyed... they finally meet again... glad that inuyasha realized that the babies were his and kagome's... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 19:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm utterly in love with this story :] I just read all chapters up to date and could hardly tear myself away from my laptop, haha. It's so rich with detail, but I don't think it's extremely cluttered or jumbled. And I totally don't hate you for Inuyasha and Kagome breaking their bond. In the end, it only made them realize how much they loved each other and that it was indeed, natural to do so.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 18:29 EST
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YAY!!!!!!!!! Everything's good again! Almost... Kagome's cancer is going to leave right? Right? RIGHT?!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORE YOU!!! OMGoodness! *tear tear* that was sooo beautiful and I am so glad that they found each other!! Please Update ASAP! Thank you so much for writing this fic! you are amazing!
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 14:24 EST
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Omg i'm like crying that was so sweet!!! They're together thats so great!! Plz update soon it was great!!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 13:12 EST
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I need to stop reading fiction that makes me cry while watching romance movies the day before valentines lol
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 not signed in On: February 13, 2010 13:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD!! they're together again! yes! i love this story. i cried. and i squealed with joy. thank you for this update. and update again ASAP please! thanks(:
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGGGHHHHH!!!*sniff*sniff* that was heart wrenching...oh please, let them be re-united soon and please say it ain't so that Kagome has Breast Ca...I hope that it's just Inuyasha's pain that she's feeling.. Anyway this was great reading as usual. I'll be waiting for the update, soon
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Omg Plz tell me she gets better!!! Lol this is great but plz dont let kagome die she has to live!!! Plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2010 19:18 EST
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::grumbling:: she'd better get better... ::glares::
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Reviewed By: GLily On: February 10, 2010 00:11 EST
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wow! So, I've sat down tonight and read it from the beginning to your most recent chapter and I have to say it is amazing. I have to wonder though about Kagome's pain and her baby. Her baby is demon, and the mountain is very very pure... Could the child's demonic aura and it's link to her be what is causing her pain? Wouldn't the purity of the mountain attack the aura of her baby? Looking forward to seeing you resolve things.
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