| "You're My Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Lovewray [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2017 20:13 PDT
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Please update n keep me posted
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Title: Another A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
Reviewed By: Usaki( me but too lazy to log in) On: January 30, 2011 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is THE BEST fanfic besides Want To Be Your Slave. Its equally as good!!! i hope theres still lots more fluffy love! I do love happy endings! Please continue updating this!!!! Its so moeeeee。 Σ（・□・；） |
Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 04:01 PDT
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Wondering whats going on with InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 21:32 PDT
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Did you kill of dear InuYasha? That would be dissapointing. But the story is good.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2010 15:37 PDT
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I was not sure if I would want to read this or not (I don't like to see Inu hurt), but this is quite well written (only a few errors here and there). In fact the only thing that did bother me was in the first chapter you have Inu think that he could not commit suicide because it was a sin, but in Japan suicide is not a sin. Since Inu is a warrior of the noble class (both his mother & father were nobility)seppuku(aka harakiri)would be a viable option for him. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
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Reviewed By: PhantasumFantasy On: March 18, 2010 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the thought of Inuyasha like this! I want to know where all this is going to lead in the end! Plz continue! I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2010 12:42 PST
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Very interesting consept. I am unshore if i feel sad or excited for dear InuYasha. But keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Midnights scream On: December 24, 2009 11:17 PST
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I think I may be adjusting to the personality things. It's interesting with the whole kanji on the forehead thing. I shall continue to read. :)
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Reviewed By: Midnights Scream On: December 13, 2009 18:06 PST
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It's definately interesting and I like the concept, but I'm not sure how I like exactly how Sesshomaru is acting. I have a hard time Sesshomaru would be fucking Inuyasha while thinking he wasn't good enough. I see him as having too much pride to do that. Other than that I like it. I like having them get along though so hopefully Sesshomaru and Inuyasha will learn to love one another. can't wait to read the next chapter
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Title: your my everything
Reviewed By: angeluswilliam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2009 08:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am liking this a lot seems like you've been writing for a long time not like a 1st timer.Please continue I am anxious to find out what happens.
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Reviewed By: Tayala_Anamore [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2009 08:30 PST
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okay, this coming from a BIG bdsm fan, i have to say, this was a very hot chapter. i think i'm going to enjoy this story very much ;)
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Reviewed By: Tayala_Anamore [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2009 14:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good start. it seemed a little rushed but i liked it. i hope you keep going :)
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