| "Merry Christmas, Inuyasha" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2010 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute. Loved how they helped the little boy find his mother, really showed them getting into the Christmas spirit. I loved how you had Inuyasha think about how Kagome was changing him for the better. Nice take on his claws, definitely something I haven't seen done before. Most people (including myself) just assume that they are razor sharp. You took a different approach and it came out great. Excellent work.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 21:51 CST
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Eeee, this is so cute! I love all of your holiday fics, and this certainly is just as awesome as the rest. InuYasha is so precious in this - you do a great job of showing how laid-back he is growing due to Kagome's influence. I laughed at the San-ta-claws thing, because my Japanese sensei in college actually made a joke similar to that. ^_^ It was a fun reminder of my own history, LOL! Great job!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT. The emotion in this story was wonderful. I loved your characterization for both Inuyasha and Kagome. Terrific job.
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Title: Really Nice!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed that - it took a lot of thought to write that one out with the emotion that you put into it. Great Job! Amber
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2009 22:12 CST
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Finally found the time to read this! It was a good little holiday story. Several chuckle/aww-worthy moments, like Souta trying to impress girls at school. Those were the days when it was as easy as attracting birds! I liked how Inuyasha took it upon himself to help that kid, and I also liked Kagome's present. I can tell you put a lot of thought into that.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 11:23 CST
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This was very cute!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2009 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With all of the updates and repair work you are doing on your fics I almost missed this new one. I would have been seriously deprived if I had, since this is a great Christmas story. I loved how Inuyasha was mistaken for Santa (I have seen it in other fics but I loved how you did it here). I also really liked how you highlighted Inuyasha's softer side without making him too OOC.
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