"When Darkness Falls" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Cool! Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 02:11 CST Comment/Review: I must say I really enjoyed this Vamp DBZ fic. Sorry that is was so sort though. I would have been nice if had gone on for a while longer...
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Reviewed By: starsbrella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 23:41 CDT Comment/Review: WoW!!! I love this fic so much! I have my own vamp dbz fic, but nothing as good as this one! Sorry i don't review ever chapter but i hope this one will make it up for all six of them ::smiles innocently:: I love the fact that Goku and Vegeta where sort of fighting over Bulma then Goku got Chichi. and how CHi and Bulma got along so well. I love the b/v in this fic. so sex and dark just what i like. And i'm a numba one yamcha blashing fan so killing off that loser made me really happy ::smiles evilly:: Great job on the story! Even though it was short it was very well written and i couldn't have like it any other way!!! Great job! Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Bulma On: July 28, 2004 20:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story was sooooo good I absolutely luved it!!!! ^_-
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Reviewed By: lil miss crazy On: February 20, 2004 01:48 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: aaawww ovr already!!?!??! it was soo good! i luved it! realli realli good!^_~
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Reviewed By: *ladyrj* On: June 04, 2003 19:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: hey! your story is cool but theres some little problem in it(just plain disgusting) But i really like the story and all, but sometimes(way too much info.) anyway i like your other fics too its tight!!! Keep up the good work and good luck! CHAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 10, 2003 22:01 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: That was gross, yet wonderful to read. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 20, 2002 22:21 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! the last chapter was so incredibly morbid, gory and descriptive!
I LOVED IT!!! i didn't think anybody would write things like that other than me!!!!! it's so reasuring to know i'm not alone.
did i mention i would absolutely love a sequel? well i would! please! |
Reviewed By: Hekigan On: August 07, 2002 17:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEEEAAASSSSEEE more chapters i beg you i love this so far |
Reviewed By: Hekigan On: August 07, 2002 17:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEEEAAASSSSEEE more chapters i beg you i love this so far |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 16:30 CDT Comment/Review: I could've sworn that you had already posted about 5 chapters of this here... Oh well. Either way I'll be reading it cause I love this story. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 28, 2002 23:23 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: woo! i likes this one too! i'm baffled as to where this story will go next. so update soon!(i shouldn't even bother to ask, you always do. you're cool that way!) |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2002 10:02 CDT Comment/Review: ooooooh! plzplzplz update ASAP. i like vamp storys :D
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Layla On: July 30, 2002 09:46 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the story!!!!Can't wait 'till the next chapter!Plz!Update ASAP.Keep^the good work! |