| "Ma Baby's daddy" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jilly o On: September 17, 2011 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate how much of a jerk Trunks is, I cant wait untell he gets caught. Pan is silly for letting him use her I hope she comes away from this ok, but it dont look like it will. Poor Goten I hope hes ok with that job and everything turn out good but he is a saiyan and a human cant harm him. I need more another chapter PLZ. |
Reviewed By: fameworld [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2011 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bra and GOtens relationship seems cute to me I like where that is going. Trunks is an loser and I cant believe he will treat poor pan that way, I hope he will eventualy love her. I love this story cant wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: fameworld [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2011 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I wish you would finish thi, it was just getting to the good part and I'm hoooked on it. |
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