Reviewed By:Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2017 17:31 PST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wasn't sure if I was going to like this or not at first. I was
not sure about Seiji calling Shin weak and sending him away for
that length of time without seeing him.....seems uncharacteristic.
I think I would like to see more from shins point of view. And why
did the warlords keep him so long? This is just my insatiable need
for more of the story. I still feel my insides twist up in anxiety
when I read your stories as they are brilliantly written and image
provoking. I had a feeling Naaza was dead... He deserved it for
hurting Shin. At least that is how I interpreted it. And Seiji
never answered Shins question at the end. Overall, I can't wait to
read more of your stories. You do an awesome job. I hope you are
still interested in this series because you are very talented.
