| "The Lolicon Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: anonymouse2 On: March 10, 2010 18:18 PST
Comment/Review:
So writing lolicon unlike anyone else in this pairing is not creative. Good to know. *looks down* Obvious sock is obvious
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Reviewed By: Akuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading Sess/Rin fics, and think Loli-con is interesting, but this has the be the most boring tripe I've ever read. Your writing style is very monotonous, you make many errors in spelling and grammar, and you have no characterization at all. I suggest maybe taking a creative writing class in your spare time, because you have very little talent in writing. You're telling instead of showing. I can't imagine any of the scenes in my head, which is what I should be able to do with a good story. I keep hearing that your work is supposed to be amazing, but I'm not sure why because it's certainly not reflected here. I'm very disappointed.
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Title: FF.net
Reviewed By: The ISIMS On: March 03, 2010 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate that it was taken off FF.net cuz it is still a really awesome story! keep writing!
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Title: tokkafan4life's review
Reviewed By: tokkafan4life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found the fanfiction to be very well written as well as descriptive. I also found it to be very sweet as well.I look forward to reading another master piece from this author.
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Reviewed By: Irivel On: February 28, 2010 08:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think you are great in every sense of the word. The plots are always new, you develope the stories in a very smooth way, you are a responsible author (you write loli, but you take your time to explain and in every chapter you left a note, just in case) I dont like adult/child stories, but i like yours, they are not offensive or brutal, they are nice and I always have in mind that its a ficctional storie (just like you said) so I don't feel offended in any way and I don't feel as if you were encouraging loli. Im glad you keep your stories in some place (here or in adultfanfiction) I hope to read more from you, you are a great author.
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Reviewed By: Koori On: February 27, 2010 19:54 PST
Comment/Review:
it makes me mad that now i have to go to a totally different site just to read one of my fav stories!!!! i'm still behind u please don't stop writing!
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