| "The Lolicon Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: kkkkkkkk2 On: October 20, 2010 23:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, your writing is decent, but honestly, I heard that in your fics the kid is supposed to be empowered...and she doesn't seem empowered to me. To me, this seems like grooming when he's sitting there, telling her what to do. I don't know...
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Title: I love your work!
Reviewed By: kikenshi On: March 27, 2010 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you, Skye-sama, and all your stories. Those assholes on fanfic.net don't know what the hell they are talking about. Whoever reported you for that is a close minded idiot closet case. This story is pure art, and shows off your talent perfectly. All those other people are just jealous they can't write as well as you or be nearly as creative as you are. You will always be a total inspiration and a sesshoumaru/rin fanfic ICON. You are the goddess of SessRin lolicon no one can ever match you. There may have been lolicon before but no one does it like you do and no one will ever match you. You are without rival and your fans love you. You are way too nice sometimes don't deserve all the crap you get from jealous idiots. You are the Queen of SessRin, the Queen of Lolicon, and all should bow down to your creative genius.
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Title: Thanks very much
Reviewed By: PinkBeadGirl On: March 23, 2010 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read one of your stories for the first time on ff.net and was so delighted, I followed your prompt here. I've loved what I have read here too. I thank you for the gift of pleasure reading your work brings me. What I particularly like about your writing is the excellent story line you build as well as the sense of love and caring between Sess and Rin. It makes the explicitness truly sensual and erotic rather than just 'sex'. That's an important element to me, I want to read something with a little sensuality and elegance, not just porn. I also thank you for the extremely detailed warnings you place at the beginning of your stories. It allows me to know what I am about to read and it allows me to make an informed decision as to whether I continue or not. I love Sess and Rin in feudal Japan whereas the more present time portrayal made me a little anxious and therefore I simply skipped those ones. I have no problems with anyone else choosing to read those ones ( to each his own) and your excellent warning labels allowed me that freedom of choice. I look forward to reading the rest of your offerings here and on ff.net. Once again thankyou very much and long may your muse be kind to you. Regards from PinkBeadGirl.
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Reviewed By: lockdown On: March 16, 2010 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your AU versions of this pair. I really want to see TLCBW be continued on. Really sucks about ff.net. I was wondering where you went. Don't give up, there are plenty of us in the shadows always reading.
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Title: FF.net sucks!
Reviewed By: Nightlove1 On: March 12, 2010 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think these are the best stories every and you should not quit! *huggles you*
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Reviewed By: Ratet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. It was very romantic and sweet. Top quality stuff, as I would expect from you. People will always love your work. Don't let ff.net get you down.
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Reviewed By: Meriadeth On: March 11, 2010 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was upset that ff. did that to you but I will never stop reading your stories, Keep up the awesome work
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Title: FFNet
Reviewed By: Ou-Rex On: March 10, 2010 22:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep... still loving it Skye-chan xD Go go! Stoopid FF.net finally kicked you off huh? Darn flamers. I was wondering why no updates I was sooo upset. Keep at it! I'l l always be ninja reading your stories XD
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Reviewed By: jazzberry On: March 10, 2010 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it truly enjoyed it. Sorry you got pulled off of ff seems like everything is being pulled off. Keep up the good work your an amazing writer
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Reviewed By: anonymouse2 On: March 10, 2010 18:18 PST
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So writing lolicon unlike anyone else in this pairing is not creative. Good to know. *looks down* Obvious sock is obvious
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Reviewed By: Akuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading Sess/Rin fics, and think Loli-con is interesting, but this has the be the most boring tripe I've ever read. Your writing style is very monotonous, you make many errors in spelling and grammar, and you have no characterization at all. I suggest maybe taking a creative writing class in your spare time, because you have very little talent in writing. You're telling instead of showing. I can't imagine any of the scenes in my head, which is what I should be able to do with a good story. I keep hearing that your work is supposed to be amazing, but I'm not sure why because it's certainly not reflected here. I'm very disappointed.
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Title: FF.net
Reviewed By: The ISIMS On: March 03, 2010 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate that it was taken off FF.net cuz it is still a really awesome story! keep writing!
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Title: tokkafan4life's review
Reviewed By: tokkafan4life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found the fanfiction to be very well written as well as descriptive. I also found it to be very sweet as well.I look forward to reading another master piece from this author.
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Reviewed By: Irivel On: February 28, 2010 08:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think you are great in every sense of the word. The plots are always new, you develope the stories in a very smooth way, you are a responsible author (you write loli, but you take your time to explain and in every chapter you left a note, just in case) I dont like adult/child stories, but i like yours, they are not offensive or brutal, they are nice and I always have in mind that its a ficctional storie (just like you said) so I don't feel offended in any way and I don't feel as if you were encouraging loli. Im glad you keep your stories in some place (here or in adultfanfiction) I hope to read more from you, you are a great author.
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Reviewed By: Koori On: February 27, 2010 19:54 PST
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it makes me mad that now i have to go to a totally different site just to read one of my fav stories!!!! i'm still behind u please don't stop writing!
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