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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 18:59 CST
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Holy crap! That was scary! I have a feeling that something is preying on her guilt and that this really isn't Kichiro, though I could be wrong. What an exciting chapter! ^_^ I really enjoyed it. Miroku attempting to wax eloquent was very humorous. I could almost think of it as sucking up. LOL Very nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 23:00 CST
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The end of chapter two was hilarious and so typical canon. I enjoyed that immensely. I'm curious about the events that led Kagome to believe that she is responsible for her friend's death. Inuyasha is too cute in this one. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: February 26, 2010 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story update soon
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