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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 22:17 CDT
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WooHoo! Take that Naraku! I really liked this chapter and love Kagome's additional power. It was sweet to bring Izayoi into the picture. Can't wait to see what the girl's have planned. I'd love to see them play a significant role in the battle. ^_^ Wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: HighOnInHalants [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2010 08:19 CDT
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sweet...cant wait til the final battle and the description of the Dog General as Naraku's last incarnation ::shivers:: brutal...wish there were lasting scenes of bloody chunks and gore...but i guess we all have our own giggity. all in all homegirl i am more interested in battle crammed stories but this one strangely peaks my interests to no end...and how you put in your own ideas of the shinto religion and Kagome's purification powers...wow youre damned intelligent and 'hella' creative and thats what it takes to write a fan fiction based on a series' original storyline dont mean to asskiss but i admire anyone who is humble about their work but you should admit when you totally pwned ass...which you did...you got a fan from here out, g...
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 19:23 CDT
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That was a very sweet chapter. It was mushy, but I liked it anyway. I really liked the playfulness in Inuyasha. Poor guy has been so deprived all of his life. It's good to see him happy. ^_^ Also, it's good to see Kagome see just how much he loves her.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 21:08 CDT
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Sorry I haven't been reviewing. Hopefully, Kikyou will be an asset. I'm kind of worried about Sango. Naraku is really, really bad. First what he did to Kichiro, and now he's going to make the boys face their dad? That's so evil. I felt really bad about the whole Kouga thing, and feel sorry for Kagome. I can't wait to see what's going to happen with the Inu-no-Taisho. I wonder if it will be an incarnation, or if he really intends to bring him back from the grave. Can't wait. ^_^
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 11:17 CDT
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Very nice! i like this story a lot! keep up the great work! i cant wait to find out what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2010 21:49 CDT
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Such great chapters. Had me crying and laughing. I can't wait to read what happens next. And I for one like that Sessy has his Rin :)
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 00:17 CDT
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Another fav. story of yours Can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2010 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far! Very original idea :) I also like the way you've made Inuyasha act, even if it is a little OOC. But really, nobody knows what he WOULD be like in these situations hehe. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 17:18 CST
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Yay! Go Inuyasha. Kick Kikyou's ass! Oh, I really hope he sends her back to hell. That would wonderful. ^_^ Very nice chapter. Even without action, it held my attention. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: February 28, 2010 23:57 CST
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I love this update soon
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 21:41 CST
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Ah, finally. I wouldn't have thought that Kagome would have such misconceptions. This is going to be a tough one. Miroku is so intelligent. I hope he can prove that Kichiro's presence is Kikyou's fault. It still won't change Kagome's mind though. I have to wonder how that will come about. Nice dilemma. ^_^ I like how it crosses with Inuyasha's and Kikyou's relationship.
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: February 28, 2010 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that chapeter I can't wait to see what happens next maybe you can update later on today
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 18:59 CST
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Holy crap! That was scary! I have a feeling that something is preying on her guilt and that this really isn't Kichiro, though I could be wrong. What an exciting chapter! ^_^ I really enjoyed it. Miroku attempting to wax eloquent was very humorous. I could almost think of it as sucking up. LOL Very nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 23:00 CST
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The end of chapter two was hilarious and so typical canon. I enjoyed that immensely. I'm curious about the events that led Kagome to believe that she is responsible for her friend's death. Inuyasha is too cute in this one. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: February 26, 2010 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story update soon
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