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| "Forever Caged" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] | Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 22:56 EDT
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HAHAHA ya i feel you on the sleep thing i could use some;p Now as for Lilly and Mikhale i will have more about them but they dont have a very big part in all this. This was merely and "I how do you do" kinda chapter to let you get to know him a little bit better. His Master knows everything to know about his pet thus the reason why his master always has him watched** who took the pictures is coming up in the next chapter :)and i'm hoping i can fit in more of Jupiter and the secrets she is keeping...problem is i cant find a good place to put them in *sigh* well i'll just make it fit like i do with my favorite pair of jeans ;p Thanks for reading! SH
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 20, 2010 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, Im so drowsy today! I read the new chapter this morning and had to wait till after work to review =P It's one of those days where I could have slept away. Anyhow, Im sorry if this is a bit scatter brained on my part, Im half asleep now and attempting to type with my eyes closed lol I was, however, alert enough this morning to register that I liked this chapter and Im sad Katz had to miss the party =p I wanna jump in and save Lilly from the big bad blondie, even thoguh he confuzzles me *laughs* Riki is still Riki, and Iason cracks me up. Gotts ta wonder if the reporter/photographer is going to be burnt to a crisp though, cuz if his intentions are to take the photos to Jupitor, who should know and or at least have a hint of what's going on between her kids and their pets as you have eluded-aluded (however u spell it gaahh!) to, than wouldn't she wanna keep it under wraps? ...Im so very very, ...not confused, but ..nphhht...I can't find the word but I wanna know just what the heck! I can safley say you keep me guessing and there's never a dull moment haha! Which is good and I like it, just not when Im left hangen lol! Again sorry bout all the grammer errors in this and my inability to stay awake *dies* I really can't wait for the next chapter, so here's me dozing out! =D ~Passing Reader
| Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 18:01 EDT
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*Cheers* Yay i'm happy your RaoulXKatze fan now :D It always seemed just plain wrong to pair them up with someone else* Thanks for reading! SH
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 17, 2010 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always like your chapters, it's hard not to lol! I like the fan service we got with Katz, XD yaay for cross dressing! *dies* Everytime you update and I think im about to get some relife from the suspence there's always more to be had! It makes me impationt, but longer chapters are nice. Very nice. Me likes long chapters, just not the time it takes to write them ;p It's dinner time and I'm starving so I'm going to cut this a little short ^^; Loved this chapter, and I really really wanna see the next one! You've turned me into a RaoulxKatz fan, who would have thought?! Here's adoring the read! ~Passing Reader
| Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 08:17 EDT
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:D You know it always pissed me off when i read or watched the ovas when it came to Riki and Guy that's why I'm having Riki *mumble,mumble* so there you go :D and you see it all works out in the end hehehe:)I plan to keep dropping hints as i go along i got something that i wanna put in there before the secret gets out. Hopefully i can get longer chapters out instead of multiple chappies..but once i get to 3k words my brain shuts down... Anywho hope you like this chapter! thanks SH
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 17, 2010 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I did enjoy this chapter, and I think I understand what you mean about the updating glitch :p I absolutely ador Katz! I feel a totally diffrent side of his character that I dont think has been explored befor and I'm loving it XD Still miffed at Riki for running after Guy, but he's Riki and he's gotta do it (why God, why? lolz) ;p I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hopfully for some of those blanks (the plot) to be filled *dies* =D ~Passing Reader
| Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 23:49 EDT
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the speed in updating here is funny hehehe.*** If i update at lets say...9pm then it wont transfer over until the following day the same with reviews. so you may see 2 updates at the same time when i really updated 2 days ago...confused you yet?*** I'm happy you thought it funny like i hoped it would. Sometimes what i think is funny others might look at it and think...wow..lammmeee! so thank god it worked out :D***Thanks again for reading! Hope you like this next chapter!
| Title: Its hooot! :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 12, 2010 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh, I hate humid weather, feels like im swimming in my own sweat *yuck!* Anywho, It would seem that I missed an update or that you updated twice, so I got double the read *sqwee* Definatly alot more going on now, I love the jokes Riki was cracking! They were halarious! Sure stroke of genious on your part, since they were actually funny "Did you fall on something hard? Was it big and blond too?" XD *dies* I think humor is hard to write, and Im sure that most peple would agree that it dosn't seem to translate well since you really need tone to get the punch line across. You totally nailed Riki's tone =D Im very excited about whats going to happen next, and I really wish I could put spaces with these reviews so that they'd be easier to read *sigh* All well, can't have everything right? Toodles! ~Passing Reader
| Title: Author Comment
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2010 21:07 EDT
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Yay! I'm happy you like this chapter :D I plan to bring out what info Katze found out soon. I'm in between making longer chapters which will have me posting later as well or keep making shorter chapters to try and post every 2-3 days like i have been so it doesnt seem like i'm dragging it along lol. Not sure yet. Thanks for reading! SH
| Title: Little White Towel
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 07, 2010 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raoul: "Did he ever make you feel like this?" Katze: "What? Who?" I laughed in the middle of the lemon *dies* I'm still laughing! (oh poor poor jaded lover!) I think I found my favorite sentence, hell, I think I found my favorite chapter =D Your amazing and I am so very, very happy I did not have to wait long for an update *Thank you!* I even got my towel dropping scene, lol! Yes the towel is off, quite literally =D Poor Katez, now if we can just figure out what's going on we'll be set! Can't do that from the bed though. XD I look forward to reading more of this,thank you so much! Until next time!!! ~Passing Reader
| Title: Author Comment
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2010 03:54 EDT
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Hehehe looks like you dont have to wait for very long long for the update :) The towel is off! Thanks for reading!! SH
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 06, 2010 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gosh, I didn't see the author comment till after I reviewed lol! I thought someone else on here had reviewed :p Thank you so much for answering my question, I only saw the anime, sadly I don't have the novels, but I read part of them when someone was posting them...which I think is illegal...^^; Probibly why they stopped since I havn't found them since and they quit updating, gaaah! Thankyou so much for changing the review setting on here, it's much easier for me than on ff.net, though I visit both. I guess your stories easier to spot on here if I had to say why *laughs* Again your story is a wonderful read and I look forward to more (I've been visiting this site more b/c of it :p )Food for the author! *feeds you* =D
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 06, 2010 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want Katze to suduce Raoul...inadvertantly, purposely, ...by dropping his towel, I don't care I just neeed to reead it! XD I'm allowed to say this with only mild embaressment b/c we all know that everyone else is thinking it too. Why the cliff hanger? Why?! I'm all excited now, and my cheeks hurt from smiling so please update soon and put me out of my self induced misery lol! Beautifully written as always, until next time! ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2010 04:09 EDT
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Hi HI!! hehe i changed the review thingy when i saw a comment that anonymous readers couldn't do review here on FF. About Katze I'm going off the novels not the anime so if you havent read the novels some of the things i refer to in my fic will be weird... Katze was picked to be made into a Furniture when he was in Guardian and became Iason's and while a Furniture he got caught hacking by Iason who could have had him killed since he found out all Eos dirty little secrets but instead used his talent in the market:D ...but i think i read a fanfic of him becoming a furniture the way you said...I 'm going to go nuts until i find that story again... Thanks for reading! i normally try and update every two days :)
| Title: Yaay! You changed the review thingy! =D
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 02, 2010 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I really do need to make an account on here, but I feel bad bout doing that if I don't write anything ^^; I'm really excited now for Raoul and Katze's relationship, though this chapter was mostly set up for what's to come. I can't wait to see everyone's reations when thay figure out who it is. I'm sure I know at least one who's in on it, but it was all but said anyway lol I eagerly look forward to more of this story and I hope more people will read this fic on this site, but I'm begining to fear that it's being a tad bit neglected :( (I mean the site by the way ^^; ) P.s Just a question b/c I haven't seen the anime in forever (been waiting on the new one *sqwee*), but wasn't Katze made a furniture for hacking and having like Ciber-sex? Maybe I'm thinking bout something else, but I distictly remember seeing soemthing like that...If you don't know either that's fine, just thought I'd ask *laughs*. Thanks a bunch for sharing! ~Passing Reader
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