| "Kagome's Secret Buttons" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, two chapters for the price of one! I think your M/M/F threeway came out very nice, especially considering you said you'd never done that pairing before...although, I guess you can't really use the term 'pairing' when it's a three-way. At first, I was expecting a glimpse into Sango and Kikyou's bedroom for the night. I wonder...
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 21:36 EDT
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Very nice! Im a little confused about the two conditions with kikyo. I could only pick out one. But truthfully this is a great fanfic! And i LOVE how much you update!!! Keep up the great work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2010 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There we go, condom business all cleared up, like you said. Really enjoyed the new chapter. I'm glad Inuyasha knows about Miroku now, although he'd apparently been suspecting something already, anyway. Now Miroku just has to find out...I wonder if he already knows too. Keep updating and I'll keep reading!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2010 14:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww..so it was cute how InuYasha didn't get mad (still wild and completely out there, but cute in its own quirky, totally befitting of this story, way). Very creative scene - that one on the train. I love that this isn't just an insane pwp and that there are things that bother her. Its interesting reading about it and how Kagome, InuYasha, and the people around her deal with it! Great chapter! Until the next! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! OMG! This is crazyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for yur next update!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 15:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is wild, I love it! And I do love that the plot is skeletal with the sprinkling of problems here and there that come w/ their 'quirks'. Makes it very interesting. I'm excited to read how InuYasha will react when Kagome tells him! ~Amber :)
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Title: Okie Dokie
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh...I see - said the blind man. Well, I can figure Miroku probably uses a rubber with Kagome because since Inuyasha is hanyou, it was to keep him from smelling Miroku "inside" Kagome. Maybe Inuyasha can't wear a condom because they don't make one large enough? LOL...but seriously, great job so far! Glad to hear there won't be any angst bombs dropping from the sky, but I'm definitely enjoying the fact that there's a smidgen of plot mixed in with all the PWP-ness. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LordLore [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 05:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one. I'm really interested in where you take this one. And you style of writing is great to read. Lord Lore
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 03:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm trying to figure this out...he pulled out with Sango, and Miroku used a rubber with Kagome...was Kikyou's other condition that he cum inside of her? I hope she doesn't turn sinister, trying to have his baby to lord it over him. Then again, it would certainly bring more "plot" into your PWP world, and if you're going to play the game you have to be willing to pay the price... Even her accidentally getting pregnant is a possibility, now, not that that's necessarily what you had in mind at all. I'm sure I'm just jumping to totally random and inaccurate conclusions, but I shall eagerly await your next update, regardless of whatever direction you decide to take this puppy.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 22:01 EDT
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Man, it would be so fucking hot to have a boyfriend I was so comfortable with that we could trade fantasies. With most of the lovers/boyfriends I've had in the past, it would have been super awkward if I'd said one of my weirder ones like, "I want you to rape me and make me like it." And they would've been like, "Ummm, can you dress up like a maid?" and I'd have been like...you are so goddamned boring. lol. ;p
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the OOC-ness...really when it boils down to it, there's no such thing as OOC when it's an AU setting. You are allowed to do whatever you want. Every once in a while, there's really nothing wrong with sex just for the sake of sex, and I think I'm enjoying reading this fic about as much as you are enjoying writing it, so I do hope you decide to keep it going for a while. :-)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Scriptix, I would love for both Miroku and Inuyasha to find out, and then instead of getting upset, they both realize that neither of them really have the grounds for getting upset, and instead they just say 'screw it'...literally, hehehe.
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Reviewed By: LordLore [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 20:41 EDT
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Very enjoyable. I'd definetely like a round two
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Reviewed By: aaaajm? On: March 30, 2010 18:58 EDT
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love it _
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 06:16 EDT
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I say foursome! Let Inu and Miroku find out, as long as it's not some crazy-ass 'omgthisisdestroyingmyrelationshipohnoez' sort of thing. =D
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