| "The Difference a Little Time Can Make" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2010 11:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love the twist you gave this, by purifying the jewel right off. I also like this InuYasha, he's much more open and willing to listen and share (if only a bit). With the differences you're giving to each situation, I see fun times ahead!
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Title: Sweetness!
Reviewed By: soliea0death On: April 07, 2010 08:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving this! Especially the way things are working between Inuyasha and Kagome. It's like you left out alot of the things I wish didn't happen in the manga. Don't get me wrong, I still love it, but I just like the way they actually communicate with one another, and there's hardly anything holding back their feelings. I really, really hope you continue with this. I so very much would like to read the rest. So take your time, and keep up the GREAT work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 02:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just could not stop reading! This is a delightful twist to the Inuyasha universe. I think you have done a great job, in the recreation of the story that we all hold so dear. I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
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