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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 05:13 CDT Comment/Review: to be honest your grammar is awful, but the story seems interesting. So even though i would have normally give up halfway through the first page i stuck it out I think you have a good idea going just need a beta or something to help with all the grammar issues. Not trying to be a spelling/grammar nazi just when there are too many it tends to detract value from the story.
Reviewed By: Yochun On: April 15, 2010 09:01 CDT Comment/Review: nice one i like it .. good job ^^ .. i want to read more lol hahha

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