| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Title: parings o:
Reviewed By: the monster under your bed On: July 28, 2010 01:01 PDT
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I prefer seshy-sama and kagome paring :]
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Title: Inuyashakagome
Reviewed By: ttttaaaggg On: July 22, 2010 15:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please let it be Inu/Kag. I have read a story where Inuyasha did something bad to kagome and in the end she forgave him.
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Title: Pairings
Reviewed By: Hanyou-InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 10:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, love the story, one of the best ones I've read yet. I think you should stick with the InuYasha and Kagome pairing. Yes InuYasha has betrayed her in the past, many times, and i agree the betrayal the he did this time would be hard to forgive. Kagome may now be dark, and reserved she would still have the ability to forgive, it would just take time. I say have him do something to prove himself to her, i mean he already marked her as a mate so really so no one else can take her as a mate. Also... if you don't like the pairings that Rumiko Takahashi has set up then your not a true fan of InuYasha. Ive seen many good and well written stories, in my opinion, end up as sh** because the pairings that said stories advertised are complete sh**. So please do an INU/KAG pairing, and not SESH/KAG.
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 08:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mean im angry at InuYasha for betraying Kagome, but i feel like Kagome should be stuck between both the boys and wonder which one she should choose and then something happens to Sesshomaru or InuYasha so she ends up with one of the brothers.
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Reviewed By: Love.of.written.words. On: July 21, 2010 21:02 PDT
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Ahhhh! No, please let it be a Inuyasha/Kagome fic! Poor Inuyasha! Look at his face! How can you say no to that face?
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 15:17 PDT
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I really like both pairings, but for this story I think that Inuyasha should be given a chance to redeem himself. I love this story and will continue with it until the end!
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Reviewed By: ritsukun On: July 21, 2010 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT make this a Sess/Kag Pairing I BEG YOU!!! I am really tired of all of the stories if Sess/Kag everywhere. PLEASE MAKE THIS A INU/KAG
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Reviewed By: Josilin Stafford On: July 21, 2010 11:51 PDT
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PLEASE DO NOT make this a Sess/Kag Pairing I BEG YOU!!! I know Inuyasha did wrong but he's trying to make it right and both of them are suffering because of it so PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE DON"T make it Sess/Kag
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 10:14 PDT
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At this point in the story, with everything thats happened, I myself would like to see Kagome with Sesshomaru, even if its on a temporary basis. I know I voted for demon Inuyasha to be with Kagome... but I'm leaning towards Sesshomaru now. Of course you're bound to get people that still want her with Inuyasha (you could always have them share her, but thats another discussion that won't fit in one review). Back to reviewing, this chapter was short, but as usual wonderfully written. Keep it up! Your Loyal Reviewer, -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: asuna414 On: July 21, 2010 10:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this. I vote for D.IY/K.
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Reviewed By: not on my computer and forgot my password On: July 21, 2010 08:20 PDT
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i vote i/k or if you want to change it make it a polyandry fic http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7HKmu3eMEk -- in manga (the only true canon) he calls her 'shard detector' -once- (miroku when they first met asked him if they were lovers, he gave her a valued title, in that era woman were given no worth-- she wanted him to call her 'friend'). he compared her to kikyou -only at first, two or three times max. the way that 'fandom' has blasphemed inuyasha is shameful. in manga sesshoumaru was the mastermind in the mu-onna deception and he is shown as having the most evil delight in hurting his brother with torturing the impersonation of his mother (probably did such things to isayoi and inuyasha when she was alive-- that is why inuyasha found it so easy to believe). --if you still want her to be with sesshoumaru add him to the mix as she needs the protection of both males. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4yjrDSvze0 --gin
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Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: July 21, 2010 02:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D.IY/K pairing please. No Sesh/Kag, there's been too much of that lately. Longer chaps would be appreciated too. :)
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always another excellent chapter to an awesome story.You have a lot of talent and a great imagination..I'd vote the >> SESSH/KAG pairing
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Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 00:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
right now i want to scream about the shortness of the chapter and the cliffy you left us with :P i love your story, and either way you make it, sesskag or inukag it doesnt matter, although what do you think about inu/kag/sess? i see it pretty often around and when they writer is good, the story does not feel ridiculous as i thought it might. But if i were to choose a pairing i would choose inukag and not sesskag :) hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Dott On: July 10, 2010 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the path that ur going is great! ^.^ i love it! the pain, heartache! yet the love awe! its beautiful writing. Yes! let us see what u want us to see. i like that ur letting the reader know Inuyasha's pain for what he's done, dont rush it like other fic's do, in the forgiving area. ur a very creative writer and i love this story a lot! --Dott
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