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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 00:08 EDT
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Cliffhanger... Grr. I really do love jealous!naruto, he's so cute X3 haha. This one was sort of just like a transition short, but I'll take what I can get! Nice work, I love your writing style X]
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2010 01:06 EDT
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Oh my gosh sasuke is finally becoming human! Gasp! It great that they're finally gonna start rebuilding their relationship. I'm so looking forward to the hopefully good upcoming events
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Reviewed By: DiscordiaCruentus On: September 06, 2010 17:43 EDT
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I want to forgive sasuke, I really do, but he's such an idiot!! This entire time he had convinced himself that naruto had raped hit but it was practically the total opposite. Haha I know this was meant to be sorta serious but I can't help but laugh. Poor Mai, she's so naive.
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 22:12 EDT
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Aww poor sasuke is breaking down. He's so unstable in the manga that it honestly makes me wonder why he hasn't snapped and just killed everyone yet. I'm totally enthralled by this story now! I want to Know what happens next, to see Sasukes epiphany moment! You are awesome
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 22:05 EDT
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Wow. just wow. so was it consentual or not? cuz the whole hand over mouth and uncontrollable sobbing doesn't make it look like it was.but then again sasuke was drunk and all. hmm very interesting chapter. now i'm super curious about the next one.
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 20:06 EDT
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It's so funny how oblivious sasuke is. Oh my gosh! you killed Sai didn't you?! haha its ok. I never really liked him anyways XP
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2010 01:02 EDT
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Aww! We're finally seeing the romance!!! Sasuke's dream was pretty trippy though haha I had to read it twice. I can't beliec=ve its already been a year! I'm so excited to see what happens next X]
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2010 20:59 EDT
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haha I really do love naive!sasuke because honestly sasuke seems like the kind of person to have absolutley no interest in sex. ha i cant wait to see what the next chapter will be :]
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 01:01 EDT
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wow sasuke being an absolute fail in the sex department haha thats actually something naruto can tease him about being better at lol. I like this story alot. please update soon =)
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 21:48 EDT
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Hmm I've never really thought of the naruto ninjaverse like that. And feel incredibly ignorant for not thinking of it. I sorta feel like naruto at this point. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter though X]
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Reviewed By: ZeeBee On: July 06, 2010 01:48 EDT
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me again. i was really surprised that the people would know about ninja, but i shouldnt be be because it makes sence XD we civilians tend to figure things out one way or another. i love how you have sasuke's personality. it matches him XD all those thoughts and he's barely said anything in the whole chapter.
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Title: Yay~
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright~ More updates, awesome~!!!! Can't wait
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Reviewed By: Discordia Cruentus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 22:34 EDT
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Hazaa more chapters for me! X] I love it when sasuke loses his cool. It can only end in laughter. I'm hoping this result in awkward moments, stuttered excuses, and lots of blushing!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its interesting to see Sasuke's POV on the whole matter, will we be seeing some of NAruto's POV in the future?
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Reviewed By: ZeeBee On: July 04, 2010 15:32 EDT
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c: ive been following this story for a bit and i really really like it ! i wonder what will happen when they start working.. and going to school too. hmm.. it sorta bothers me how they will start to lose their ninja skills D; maybe they will find a 'normal' way to train. annnyyywahhhh really good job
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