| "Pride" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Nicole On: June 10, 2018 03:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT. Asuka was in character and so was Shinji except towards
the end when he is quiet assertive.
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Reviewed By: Archdruid Sephiroth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2012 18:29 PST
Comment/Review:
Holy shit. I read this a long time ago but didn't notice that you updated until very recently. That was hot. I liked every second of it. Though the subject isn't exactly new, its new enough and different enough to earn a 9 for creativity. Everything was well thought out and the "plot" was very good. I like how you nailed Asuka's persona in such a way that it would make sense compared to the cannon, not simply "ok she's kind of like that so she's in character". No, this was more along the lines of "wow, she really could be thinking that during the actual series". That's what separates this from the rest in my opinion. I'd really like to read more of this. It's only been 2 months since your last update. Please write more, this section of Mediaminer seems to receive so few updates lately. |
Reviewed By: Archdruid Sephiroth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's not to say. This is one the more unique lemons I've read and I have to say, the psychological inferences were simply brilliant. I don't read much on this site because its mostly drivel anyway, but this is pure gold. I see you haven't updated since early May but I hope to see more of this soon. It really is well done.
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Reviewed By: Nickus On: May 19, 2010 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Realy nice one. Gonna watch out for the next part. Would love to see some more out of Asukas Eyes.
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Reviewed By: NickRequired On: May 13, 2010 12:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice one. Wouldn't have minded to see some instances of Shinji taking her up on her offer to "do something about it, even out of the apartment" before going the whole way, but I guess the heat of the moment thing works better.
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