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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. I can imagine whats going through her head.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2010 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks pretty good! I'm going to jeep an eye on this one. ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far! Its fun to read about Kagome not taking well to being a half-demon like some other stories which have no inner demon turmoil that compares to Inuyashas.
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2010 22:59 CDT
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hummm the plot thickens. I hope they can figure something out before Kagome loses herself to the voice.
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Reviewed By: wynterfrost1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2010 13:37 CDT
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I can't wait till this is updated lovvvve it I hope inuyasha and kagome make up and I wish poor sango would have a nice mate maybe shesshy and I would like maybe a hanyou for miroku too yeah I would like them all to have a long life......so keep the updates ah coming.
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2010 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is interesting to say the least. i like the idea of the story but it seems ure going around in circles. u dont seem to be getting anywhere with inu and kags and i frankly would like for all the fighting to stop and for them to act like a mated pair instead of squalbiling kids. i dont mean to offend but i would, personally, like to see someone explain to kagome and them to get together properly. plz update soon!! (=^__^=)
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Reviewed By: GLily On: June 05, 2010 01:40 CDT
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You're welcome!! I'm just glad to read an update! ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2010 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It puzzles me how someone can write such an amazing story such as this one with 13 chapters... and only 4 reviews?! (well, 5 reviews if you count mine.) I don't get it but, I hope you keep going! You're doing a magnificent job so far! :)
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Reviewed By: GLily On: May 29, 2010 23:24 CDT
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I like the story so far. The plot seems very original. :-) My only pet peeve is the tense you are using... Maybe try shifting it a bit, so instead of writing: When Inuyasha drops down in front of her, Kagome gives a startled yip before squaring her shoulders and yelling. "You jerk! You scared me half to death!" Sango shakes her head and glances at Miroku. When she notices his eyes are glued to Kagome's butt, she sighs heavily and grabs his arm yanking him to a halt. Try this instead: When Inuyasha dropped down in front of her, Kagome gave a startled yip before squaring her shoulders and yelling. "You jerk! You scared me half to death!" Sango shook her head and glanced at Miroku. When she noticed his eyes glued to Kagome's butt, she sighed heavily and grabbed his arm yanking him to a halt. Otherwise I think it is coming along well. Keep the chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update!! Enjoyed reading it!!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, I can't wait too read more about Kagome and her changes. update soon.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!! I love the plot!!
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