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Reviewed By: pisq On: June 03, 2010 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't believe how good you are at writing Bulma/Vegeta. I cant read any other authors.
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Reviewed By: Seidesilk On: June 03, 2010 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God, I waited all week for this when you mentioned it at the end of "Free My Soul." Thank you, it was wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Miss ms On: June 03, 2010 09:21 EDT
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Love it! I agree a conclusion should really end this story just for perks and giggles!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 22:42 EDT
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You know, I just read this story again and I really think a continuation would work. It would be interesting to see how a "friendly affair" would enhance into a relationship and love. P.S. Still a good fic the second time around. =P
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 22:09 EDT
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Wonderful story! Loved it. If you really wanted to you could continue it but it's great as it is. I love how Bulma was Hester Prynne, it really played well with the the events that were happening to her. Once again, wonderful writing! Thanks for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: June 02, 2010 21:44 EDT
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^w^ Now there's the author we all know and adore shining her best again! Quiet the story you've given us to read. It was a great read. The piece was very compact and well presented. You hit all the targets for moving the piece along a wonderful pace (not to fast, not to slow). The depth of detail was well done as well (no overload or lacking of it). I really adore the raw driven passion between the two. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 20:04 EDT
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That was hot! XD We know it wasn't lovey-dovey between them so a passionate tryst is perfectly plausible. Great one-shot, fantasic as always and very in character.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful, just like all of your stories.
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