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Reviewed By: Sarah1986 On: January 27, 2011 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is gotten ao sad i was at the brink of crying.i cant wait to see what well happen next.i feel so sad for the pups i hope they all make it pass this and inuyasha to. |
Reviewed By: Sarah1986 On: January 02, 2011 01:37 EST
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yes a shot but all to sweet i really like the end can't wait to what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Sarah1986 On: December 30, 2010 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what is turning out to be a wonderful piece of work and i can not what to see what happens next. i gave you a overall rating of 10 cuz it's that dang good |
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2010 23:14 EST
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AWESOME!!!!! Oh my god i cant wait to find out what happens during the birth! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2010 05:34 EST
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Enjoying your fic a lot the last chapt wa s good.The inu pups obviously don't want 2 come out because their dad isn't there and they can sense it and r fighting not 2b born which is causing Kagome problems.They mustn't feel safe 2 come out but now Sess has arrived I look forward 2 next chapt.it would serve him right if he got all girls.lol |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 13, 2010 16:42 EST
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:D I want to write a long review, and as always the short version is I love it! I am at work and don't have enough time left to write out a full list of the things I loved most, but I will say I am hoping to see some repair between Kag and Sess.... none of the all of a sudden oh I forgive you, but you don't seem the type to write that :D |
Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2010 19:57 EDT
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I really am enjoying this story! Who in the world was Kagome fighting? Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2010 17:30 EDT
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poor kags :( that is sad :( I hope she doesnt stay away for too long
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Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2010 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG thank you for updating! I loved it so much. It made me Q_Q for Kagome. omg are the pups going to be ok. whats sesshy going to do now? ahh the wait! i want to know XP !!!! I can't wait for the next update....
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Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2010 15:20 EDT
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omg pls don't tell me it's completed i was enjoying it soo much. please keep updating. it was fun and the characters were very believable. I'm loving the twist in things and how it all falls together and not just pulled outta thin air =D thank you. even though there are few errors thats fine i can live with it. but not if u end it. so PLEASE keep writing ^^ you've got me hooked =P
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2010 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your grammar may be deplorable but the story is fantastic. i am enjoying it very very much. thank you for taking the time to write it and then upload it here for our enjoyment! i love the advancement in the characters.. i like how they have adapted to the story but in a believable way.
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2010 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and I hope you continue with it.! It keeps my interest and its really enjoying to read it. You're a great writer with good ideas. I really hope you keep going with this story. I'll recomand it to some of my friends. Good luck and please update. Thank you.!
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Reviewed By: bethany [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2010 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far and I am hoping that you will be finshing not just letting it die a sad and very painful death
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Reviewed By: kiku902 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 03:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was very well done!! i loved it! but the stat says that is complete?! pleeeeaaase tell me thats not true! this is a fantastic fic and like buzzk97 i would like to know what happens next! please? =3
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 18:28 EDT
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Please tell me that this story is not completed! Please finish I need to know what happens!
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