| "Hanging by a moment..." Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story keep up the good work..LOL THANK YOU
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 18:24 EDT
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I love it! Now of course, I am a big fan of authors who write what they want to write (and who don't worry about limitations). (This must have been secretly killing you to write...) So feel free to ignore that 500 word count limit and explore...add...develop... Personally, I'd love to read a sequel (with no limits) with a lovely lemon after Kags teases Inuyasha mercilessly. I can just picture a series of ever more enticing bath scenes that Kags let's Inu watch until he can't stand it anymore. Now that would be fun! Of course, what you have here is more in character than my little idea. So bravo for keeping everything 'in character.' Now I better start writing Ch 16 of HMG. See ya!
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Title: Coolness!
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 16:53 EDT
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I like what you're doing here...and btw, fwiw, I consider, for purposes of handy usage, a drabble anything less than 500 words, with a perfect drabble being a hundred. It's a handy convention... And I like your first two pieces a lot!
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was wondering when I'd see something new from ya! Amber
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