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| "Accidentally Funny" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2011 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best and most hilarious pieces I have ever read and fell out of my seat on several occasions. Sess,Inu,Kouga and Naraku?? Really?? When Naraku joined the mix I died laughing and wow...Kouga-kun is gay for Inuyasha!! You have excellent writing skills and humor. You deserve SOOOOO much props for this. AWESOME WORK!!! 10 across the board!!! SP | Reviewed By: AngelHeart21 On: July 29, 2011 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the funnest stories I have ever read. I loved every minute of it! | Reviewed By: MewHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2011 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! was lmfao, this story is amazing. I love your writing :) | Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2011 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I re-read your story and I have to say, I just love Kagome's explosions. They're fantastic. I also enjoy the attempts at one-upmanship with Sesshoumaru. His lewdness is humorous and very entertaining. After reading the story all the way through in one go, the word 'contretemps' stood out has having been used quite a bit more frequently than I would have. I don't know if that's a good or bad thing, just an observation. Anywho! Hilarious story. Hope rl is treating you well. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 15:45 EDT
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These last two chapters were hilarious. I love how you paired everyone up and just can't get Shippou and his crayons out of my head. LOL Sesshoumaru sure is one horny dog. I think anything would put his mind on sex. The whole thing with Midoriko and Naraku was funny as well, particularly the color of the ring. Couldn't believe that whole thing aroused Sesshoumaru. *head desk* He needs a harem! LOL Great story, lot's of fun. ^_^ | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, 'accidentally funny' my ass! This sucker was deliberately funny and I enjoyed every minute of it! We already knew that Inuyasha was still around in the future, but I like that little twist you threw out at the end to let us know that our favorite Sengoku jidai humans are still around, too. I can totally see Sango deciding to go for Inuyasha if Miroku were no longer an option, and since Kagome was certainly not an option for Inuyasha any more, what's a hanyou to do, right? Some can argue that since it was anime-only it's not technically canon, but Sango did throw herself at Inuyasha in that episode where they all got drunk off that weird mist while looking for sake for Mushin or whatever, so it's totally believable. And with Kouga being...erm...no longer an option for Ayame, and Miroku's notorious foot-in-mouth syndrome when it comes to that infernal question of his, that match was totally believable, too! Shippou and Rin are a cute couple I have seen done repeatedly in more serious settings, so definitely no complaints there. I also love that bonus ending you did in that last chapter with one last flashback back into the past and that ring of Kagome's, too, LOL. As soon as you mentioned it changing color, I was figuring it had to be responding to what they were doing on the inside. Blue I would have assumed meant Midoriko was holding out on Naraku, green I couldn't figure out at first though I love it was because the air freshener was making him sick, hehehehe, and as soon as Kagome 'knocked' and got that pink color I KNEW it was because Midoriko was blushing. I'd wondered if it would turn out the occupants of the ring were aware of what was happening on the outside, too, though of course Midoriko would never tell Kagome such a thing out of courtesy. Sesshoumaru better hope Kagome never finds out! LOL. All in all, wonderful story. It was totally silly and totally raunchy and totally awesome. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 08:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, poor Inuyasha. He should know better by now than to openly laugh in his brother's face. Maybe if Kagome can get him away from Sesshoumaru, then the two of them could go through the well for a few weeks. That would keep Inu safe while giving Sesshy the punishment he deserves; he wouldn't really take it out on anyone else, right? Of course, now that they already know Sesshoumaru is in the future, too, I guess Inuyasha wouldn't really be safe there, after all. Future-Sess would be even crueler for having had to wait 500 years to take out his frustrations. Hmmm... it wouldn't screw with the timeline since they already know! :-) LOL, whatever you do next, just keep up the awesome work! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2011 22:58 EDT
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Woo hoo! Crazy-hot chapter; it was freakin' awesome! And I know that song...good choice. =) | Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2011 19:57 EDT
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Outstanding chapter! I love the hotness level of it. Lol. Thanks for the update. (: | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2011 22:01 EDT
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Woo-hoo! It was only a matter of time, and totally worth the wait. Something tells me this story isn't over yet, though. Probably winding down, but I can't wait to see Kagome's face the 'morning after' when she finally gets her brains back. | Reviewed By: Nikki N. On: May 17, 2011 05:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesomely funny. Please update soon. | Reviewed By: Ravijnem36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2011 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny,Kagome isn't going to be leaving that house any time soon. the girl wont be able to walk most likely. Update soon please!! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2011 08:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, things are spicing up. And congrats on your award! You totally deserve it! | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 16:59 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/40025885/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/FanFic%20March%2 02011/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2011 07:03 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
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