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| "Playing With Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Annabananna On: July 20, 2012 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I extremely believe you have a great future of writing in your hands. The characters are original, the plot is exciting, and basically everything is just amazing. I hope that maybe someday perphaps you should become a proffesional writer and make this story into a series or book. (Totally going for a series). Keep writing! I am looking forward to seeing Sages family go completely nuts over Sage and Chase in the future! Oh and can you please add a little more of Mia and Kel somewhere in there?? I would love to read more romantic parts about them both!! | Title: To Lessie00
Reviewed By: AllourNightfrost [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2012 06:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love reading this story, and I get excited every time you update as to what may happen next. I find this story to be very well written both in grammar and concept. You are quite good at keeping the reader interested in what the next chapter may hold. I truly hope you continue to write this story, and I thank you for posting such an amazing read on this site. | Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Playingwithfire On: October 14, 2011 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just wow on this story. It's one of the best written fan fictions I've read since I've been on media miner for about 3 years. Some people just don't know a good story when they are reading one(Xeshita). I really like this story and I suggest that you should keep writing! No matter what people write. Great job on EVERYTHING! | Title: An Honest Review
Reviewed By: FunkyReader On: August 27, 2011 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe you have a good story on your hands. The creativity is great. Anyone can be a good writer if people enjoy it, it's not a hard talent to pick up, but it is hard to apply yourself and make something people enjoy. You have done this, and on the contrary to what some may believe (referring to the unrealistic reviews of Xeshitha) you have a well written story. The biggest hint that this Xeshita person is not writing a realistic review is by giving you under 5 in everything, when your spelling and grammar is a lot better than most I've seen. Don's listen to the bad reviews, listen to the people who like your story, because its the people liking the story that makes it great. :D keep writing. | Title: AWSOME!!!!
Reviewed By: J&S4ever1! On: June 29, 2011 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY like this story!!! im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo glad that you decided to keep writing this AMAZING story!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!>>>>>>>>> anyways, i just read an HOUR of useless arguing based on this fanfiction. i know that it is good to review storys but PLEASE! THE THINGS THAT XESHITHA SAID WERE ONE, NOT NECESSARY. TWO, THEY WERE WAYYY TOO LONG AND USELESS. THREE, THEY WERE WAYYYY TOO HARSH. why compare two things that are NOTHING alike???? the things Xeshitha wrote is a book worth CRAP.>>>>>>>>> KEEP WRITING THIS STORY!!!! I LUV IT!! | Title: in reply to Xeshitha
Reviewed By: mona On: February 16, 2011 15:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow talk about harsh Xeshitha, i find it odd how u CLAIM you dont have time and your rushing to comment yet you wrote about 2 pages worth of crap... and for your information i happen to know this girl and like she said your intitled to your opinion but where the hell do you come off telling her shes lieing and telling how she feels you dont know her and F.Y.I she has had stuff published and just because you dont and your probably jelous doesnt mean u have to bad talk her... b.t.w since you claim to be such a good editer and since you think you are sooooo wise how old are you? becuase it would seem since you think your better then everyone else you must be old... and you claim your not being rude and you're just speaking the truth well if you were doing that you wouldnt be calling her viewers cliche. | Reviewed By: DarkDemon123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 13:39 EST
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AND I agree with the part about"OMG THIS IS SO GOOD WRITE MORE I CAN'T WAIT" I think that that is better! :p | Reviewed By: DarkDemon123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 13:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe you, Xeshitha, should better stop sending mean critizes to other peoples work. It will make them stop writing chapters for their story and it will discourege them to keep posting. Maybe you should send tips and compliments to them instead of critizising them. | Title: Xeshitha
Reviewed By: Xeshitha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2011 20:48 EST
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Not like I want to resort to this, but I will. Not everyone is as light-reading as all of you are. I'm being bias or whatever, maybe, but there's a crapload of critics out there just like me. They will think nothing of this. People will laugh at this. I am not just being rude, this is just how REAL viewers will actually see it. That's the hard truth, like it or not. ~Lisalisa. The work I took down was fanfiction, and back when I was TWELVE. It was utter crap, definitely compared to how I write today. You say you hate ignorant people like me, but HONESTLY. You're arguing with me. If you're so high, as YOU are acting, stop arguing with me. Brush me off. Because it is more than obvious that I am bugging you. That is why you are responding. Lessie, you are not published. Don't lie like that. That is when one can get the LOWEST. You can't take criticism as well as you believe. This is my belief, just mine, but, it's quite clear, at least to me, that you can't. If you were published, you wouldn't be here. You wouldn't have the time. AND. When someone is published, obviously, they have some kind of talent noticeable to everyone in writing. And it will show in all of their stories regardless of the fact if they don't care about it much or not. Because that is the WAY they write. If you're published, you'd have a fairly good talent in writing. And you would be unable to stand writing like this. You want some shred of proof or anything? Go to a site like Urbis, or Youngwriterssociety. You will see how much people will say things like I had. And no, they aren't just rude. They know when to spot something needing change in a story. They know WRITING. They know what the PUBLIC wants. Not just a few people on this site that flatter you without any bit of criticism whatsoever. In fact, maybe you take criticism so harshly, that you moved here KNOWING that no one gives criticism here, knowing that all they will do is say, the old, expected, over-used, "OMG THIS IS SO GOOD WRITE MORE I CAN'T WAIT". | Title: i LOVE this story! unlike other ppl...
Reviewed By: Adarklove On: February 14, 2011 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, what is your problem,Xeshitha? Can't you just let other ppl ENJOY someones work? Maybe you should get off this site and go to another that has other ppl like YOU, because on this site, they only allow ppl that are not crazy, cruel, and a "FUCKING FREAK" like you.>>>>>>>> anyway.. PLZZZ WRITE MORE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!>>>>> | Title: response to Xeshitha
Reviewed By: lisalisa On: February 11, 2011 05:34 EST
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You talk about proof of your work, yet you said you took it down... i think that's crap. you have no time to upload chapters for others to see but have time to insult another works. Like i said before no one needs you, so do everyone that you are harassing a favor and GET OFF YOUR HIGH HORSE.... OR FALL OFF. This little game of talking back and forth with you is stupid and i hate talking to IGNORANT ppl. Insulting the author is one thing, insulting the readers is another. You have no talent to criticize and need to find a better HOBBY (if this is a HOBBY). Go get real work and find somewhere that pays you to do something with your life. Do not expect another comment from me b.c. i have no more time to waste on the likes of you. | Title: in reply to Xeshitha
Reviewed By: lessie00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 20:02 EST
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Like i said before, i understand your opinion, but I in NO WAY "Know that you're right." When writing these stories it's all free-style writing, i don't focus on things like grammer and structure because i do it for FUN without thinking about interfering factors in writing. So when i say i don't care, i truely don't because you have no idea what my real writing skills are. I'm a professional writing major with published work already out there, so please don't presume to know anything about me. You claim to be professional with your criticism but you aren't. Read the story or don't, just know that i won't be replying to anymore of your comments. | Title: to lessie00
Reviewed By: Xeshitha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 19:24 EST
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No, I'm not full of myself. You can believe that if you want - sharing what I know would of course come off as that. No, you don't take criticism well at all, and no, you are not writing only because it's fun for you. You care about peoples' opinion, and I know it, because you wouldn't be firing off like that if you didn't. You have to make it so clear in that response of yours that you don't care - but if you really don't care, would you need to prove it so badly? Psychology. ---With writing, you are free to express your feelings and everything, of course. But if you are not given criticism on any of your works, how do you ever expect to improve? Maybe you will someday decide to publish, once you're proud enough of your work. But the first step to that is taking in criticism. It's for you to decide if it's right or not. I understand. I won't force you to take my criticism, I can't and I wouldn't, but I'm just trying to make you understand the faults in your story. It sucks taking in negativity about your story that you like so much - believe me, I've been there, but that was years ago. Looking back, they were right. There were some faults. I just couldn't see it yet because my mind in the writing world was still at basic level. And you're at that level now, where I used to be. Maybe a little better, but it's still pretty bad. When someone insults your work, you'll say you don't care, but it will actually bother you a lot. You'll briefly think about it, get frustrated, tell yourself again and again you don't care, and then before you know it, you're either editing or looking over your writing and so on. You know I'm right. No, no one forced me to read it, but it's the stories that need help which lure critics in. Notwithstanding, I understand this outburst of yours, and if you don't listen, very well. | Reviewed By: Xeshitha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 19:12 EST
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Wow. You talk about having no life but you guys have the time to say that to me? No. You guys simply can't see constructive criticism when it's there. I know, you probably love the story, you take offense when have says something negative about it, but you have to grow up and move past that and see that there are faults. --Me having nothing on here has nothing to do with what I know. I had plenty, then I deleted it, because it was from years ago. Haven't been on this site for a while and decided to come back, because I KNOW nearly every writer on here needs help. This would be why. And I know plenty won't accept they criticism, but they do at some point. They really won't improve if they don't. You two say that was rude, but believe you me, they can get so much more harsh. People on here butter everyone up with useless comments and criticism at all that the author starts to expect everyone to love it without fault. I've seen it happen, I know how it works. I've been around thousands of sites, read plenty of stories and comments. And yes, I write myself, ever since a young age. But how I write has no part in my criticism. Judging and writing are two very different things. I was simply stating a few things that this author needs to know. You guys might like this story, but your opinions don't mean anything to publishers. And those publishers will be professionals, they can spot a good book and one that needs loads of work. They wouldn't even consider this one. It's harsh, I know, but that's life. That's how it works. No one has time to sweet-talk. This is reality. The author here might not be thinking of publishing, but if the author writes like THIS with any of their stories, they're not going to be able to publish any story, ever. That's the hard truth. And if the author isn't thinking of publishing, well, then, okay. I'm not insulting her. The only one who is insulting people is you to me. I'm stating what needs to be fixed/and or what is going to have a negative affect on readers. And just because it did not on you or others, that does not mean only me will see the faults. There are higher-level readers existing. And no, no I was not bored. I have plenty of things to do, but I figured help the people on here, even if they'll flame me. This was on top of the section of stories I went to, so of course I clicked on it. I could tell from the summary that it wasn't going to be some professional work. Lastly, if you want to tell someone they have no talent, find proof. If they have no stories, that isn't it. Some people just don't post anything because of one: they don't have time to continuously post, two: people will steal work on post it somewhere else, which has been done countless of times. If you want to call me names, have something backing it up, or you will just look stupid, at least to those with some common sense. I meant no offense to the author, though I know it probably came out that way. But there was nothing positive I could really focus on. If you come back in a year and read this, for I'm sure your own writing will have improved, you'll see all the faults. | Title: reponse to Xeshitha
Reviewed By: lisalisa On: February 10, 2011 18:06 EST
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My below comment is for you. Also, you have no homepage. Do they pay you to comment on people's writing. NO ONE NEEDS YOU, without you their life will surly go on. Were you rejected from some editor job, and now live to insult people. You have no talent and no homepage AND i hope you don't get paid for this because you suck. Please comment if you have any questions or concerns. :) | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
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