| "I'm 15 for a moment" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Review of 15 On: April 08, 2020 02:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you explained things. It was good nonetheless
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Reviewed By: mamosere On: April 28, 2012 06:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. It was fun reading this, i always enjoy reading your stories. |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2011 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duuude!! this was awesome!!! I was reading it and after she took a shower she put on her uniform?? Weird lol and then when they had sex and he went straight in lol i was like "wait isnt she a virgin??" And then after i thought she'd bitch him bout her school work but she didnt!! So i kept wondering what's wrong with her head! lolol. But then Shippou called n i was saying "ok they taught Shippou how to use a phone and then their's service in the feudal era" lol... But ah~ after it said bout THEIR kids am like "naw man, they fucking roleplaying!" AND THEY WERE!! Omg this was so amazing!!! I do NOT regret hunting u down, becuz i found a story and accidentally closed it off, n i didnt kno the name, and then when i re-found u i decided to read this first - I am not disappoint. It was hot, fucking hot.. LOL... Damn, I'm all giggly cuz fk i love that position x3 and I was so into reading it - it was jus mind blowing. I love when couples enjoy the rush of experiencing things - it always makes the sex much more exciting - that's why boring guys are BLAH!!! Again i love this!! I gotta go out but if am not baq too late amma deffo read something esle of urs - my goal is to read all ur stuff cuz i've seen ur name about before, and i feel like i kno u - not kno kno u lol, but yh - I gotsta read more of ur stuff!!! *___* |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 21:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was freaking uber sexy!
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Title: wow - wonderfully, outstandingly wicked
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 03:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since I've been so confused while reading a story. Wow. This took my breath away, honestly. I reached the part when Shippou called, calling Inuyasha 'Oyaji', and I was dumbfounded. Quickly, (because I usually don't have the patience to go on reading in case it might be explained) I went through the scenario all over again, thinking I must've missed something. I even double checked if I was still reading the same story, lol. Then I gave up and continued reading, only to discover it was ROLE PLAY. Holy Carp! (and yes, I did intend to spell 'carp') It was so amazing :) How do they say? Oh, yeah, Standing ovation, hon!
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy (too lazy to sign in) On: August 29, 2010 20:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your storeys are always fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 10:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. The only reason I gave it a nine in originality is because I have read a couple of similar stories. chuckles I even wrote one. I enjoyed it and only have one complaint. While it is true that most crossbreeds are sterile, there are exceptions to the rule. You do get fertile mules on occasion and wolves and dogs have fertile offspring. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 04:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, interesting story... liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEEEE....!! I love your stuff! w00t!
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. And a nice surprise ending. Great job, I loved it.
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Title: Hi again xD
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 07:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! kya!!! how wonderful!!! i loved it!!! so super sweet!!! i loved it!!! so soooo much!!! yeah!!! xD i always love you're fics xD
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 22:43 PDT
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This was fun!
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