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| "Want To Be Your Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: evera22 On: January 02, 2011 18:59 EST
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Awesome story!!! Now i might have missed it but does the story say how old little InuYasha is? This is such a great story keep up the good work! | Reviewed By: cathappy On: December 17, 2010 11:46 EST
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this a a sweet story. | Reviewed By: Mayue On: December 16, 2010 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it cant wait for an update :D | Title: I
Reviewed By: Wolfpup1 On: November 05, 2010 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! (Though I have seen some misplaced and misspelled words and things like ¨It cold(Should be could) be cold)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2010 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new update, the little flashback was cute. Glad Inuyasha's eyes are slowly starting to open. I realize this is shota and probably won't progress into Inuyasha's adulthood, but I can so see a mature, collected (for the most part) and hell of a lot stronger Inuyasha taking no crap from anyone...except Sesshoumaru, to whom he will remain loyal throughout the duration of his life. Whether or not Sesshoumaru would actually have any interest in an adult Inuyasha is decidedly another topic altogether, but it's my fantasy so I can do whatever I want with it! LOL, in the mean time, really looking forward to the next update of Inuyasha's childhood years. Good job!
| Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2010 16:05 EDT
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Aw I think a young volatile Sesshomaru is so adorable, lol.
| Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 01:55 EDT
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Good job! keep up the good work. cant wait till you update again!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2010 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...wonderful update! I hadn't thought about the Inu no Taisho not recognizing Inuyasha's blood as his own. That was funny when Sesshoumaru's parents had thought he'd murdered some random human. I loved when Sesshoumaru's eyes lit up when his father said he'd bet Tessaiga, LOL. It's nice to know when you're right about something that others don't believe 'yet'. Kouga barging in was another surprise, because after his parents' reaction I was confused how the wolf immediately recognized the blood as Inuyasha's, but the way you explained it made perfect sense. And that brief lemon at the end there? Also perfect. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! For a second there I thought it was a little out of sequence when Inuyasha started murmuring in his sleep right away and Sesshoumaru reacted without the freak-out of realizing that his human and hanyou selves were the same person, but when you finally got to that realization I think you handled it beautifully, and looking back on it, I can see how he can respond with his "Hush, little one" and what have you without coming to the epiphany himself at that moment, because Sesshoumaru was just so caught up in the moment that not much of anything else was registering. Hell, he forgot Miroku was human! But I love the way you did have him have his realization, he needed to have that gut-wrenching guilt moment, that "Oh god..." moment you gave him. I loved that. I also love the approach he's going to take, letting the cat out of the bag, or human, as it were, and merely confining Inuyasha to his own quarters for his protection during his human nights. Do I smell future human-Inuyasha limes on the horizon? It would be a new experience for Sesshoumaru, that's for sure. And! I absolutely love that you hinted to his full-youkai side! I've been wondering from the very beginning if his youki powers were going to reveal themselves or not. On the one hand, I'm pretty sure we're supposed to just be led to believe that Inuyasha is the same Inuyasha we've always known and loved (though a younger version, obviously, with a tremendously fucked up childhood) and the resistance was more or less just beaten out of him. Not sure what it would take to get him to lash out, since his brain isn't wired that way any more, but I would love to see him swipe his hand at somebody shouting "Leave me alone!" and little blades of energy come flying from his fingertips, everyone, including Inuyasha, staring in shock. But...on the other hand, I can't forget that you made reference to Inuyasha's father being some random, lower youkai who was killed for his relationship with a human woman. One could presume that Inuyasha's youki is still at relatively the same levels as Canon-Inuyasha considering he still only turns human one night a month, but it's definitely true of this universe that he did not have a daiyoukai father, which is the real reason Canon-Inuyasha is as powerful as he is. As for your little guy, one would think with the number of times he's been beaten as a slave that if his full-youkai side was going to show himself it would've done so by now, so Sesshoumaru's plan of just asking Inuyasha directly seems like the most logical course of action. I can't wait to find out what the answer is! And hey, this should help slave-Inuyasha's self-esteem, because if it turns out his powers can be brought out and he really is powerful, that'll mean he's worthy of Sesshoumaru after all because only somebody as powerful as the prince could handle a full-blooded Inuyasha on a rampage! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Caelestis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely one of my favorite stories ever! You have captured my heart with Sesshomaru's little puppy and with Sesshomaru himself. I love their interaction, especially when Sesshomaru realizes he can't immediately start treating Inuyasha with kindness since the slave training has taken self confidence and awareness and everything else from him and trained him to take the blame for practically anything and everything whether it was his fault or not. Oh, and Inuyasha is absolutely adorable like this! Even though I love the original Inuyasha, this one is just amazing and cute and well "squeeze" worthy, lol. The last two chapters were so heartbreaking. Made me tear up the first time I read it (this is my second time, by the way, I usually read fanfics more than once so I don't miss anything crucial). I don't usually cry when reading stuff, I've only had that experience like ... two or three times. Anyway, love the story and characters. I like that you took Miroku as the castle healer, too. Fits him ... in a weird way, but *shrug*. Please update soon! I'm DYING to know what happens next!!!
| Reviewed By: KayKay31592 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your style of writing, it is fun and easy to get into. Your spelling and grammer is good (as far as I can tell) I really enjoyed reading it, it is a very fluff filled story, but it has harder stuff in it too so it isn't to sweet. So overall I really liked this story and I really hope you continue writing it. I can't wait to see if Sesshy still likes Inuyasha and if Inuyasha is ok. Keep up the good work!
| Title: Awesome story
Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful story.I can't wait until you update.I just have to see what Sesshomaru will do now that Inuyasha is human and sick.
| Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 06:03 EDT
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I think you did a wonderful job on this chapter! I mean, why would we kill you for sending the Great Lord Sesshomaru to save his little puppy? Granted it was left on a cliff hanger but oh well. Great job and I can't wait to read more! This is probably one of the most original fanfics I've read in awhile. Most slave/master stories turn out pretty bad, but this has the potential for something better! Heck if you changed a few names and a few character descriptions you could turn this into a real story that could be published.
| Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 04:53 EDT
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AMAZING!!!! Your cliffhangers are wonderful...so suspenseful and they succeed in getting me pissed off. I'm dying to know what happens next so update quickly!
| Reviewed By: GLily On: September 16, 2010 02:32 EDT
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I love the whole story! I agree that is is very OC, but it is that aspect that I enjoy. Please update soon!
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