| "Blind to What You Want" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: watersongs [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 19:11 CDT
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Sorry I upset you, I hate to contridict constructive advice but I have dyslexia.You are right my chapters are really short and i'm working on makeing them longer, but if you read some of my other works you'llprobably find spelling and grammar mistakes. But the thing is I love to write, and I love Inuyasha and Naruto, i apologize profusely if my fic annoyed you. -Sincerly Watersongs
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2010 23:46 CDT
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...The spelling, work on it. And the first chapter, its unbearably short... I don't know about the other chapters because I didn't even bother to look at them. I actually only breifly glanced at the first chapter before desided to tell you what needed to be fixed. You misspelled Higurashi... Really? That's like misspelling Inu Yasha, you can't really call yourself a fan, if you can't spell the names... But the summary, which also needs to be worked on, was interesting enough to at least get me to look at it...
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Title: THANK YOU!
Reviewed By: watersongs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 17:29 CDT
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Yup i thought the inuyasha squeak was a nice touch lol wait till mynext update....Naraku and Kikyo join in on all the fun.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 02:04 CDT
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your very welcome , I like the new chapter yasha squeak!?!? I love it !!!
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Title: Both
Reviewed By: Both On: September 11, 2010 21:33 CDT
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Inuyahsa is both u'll find out more later Thank you for being my dedicated reader :)
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 21:15 CDT
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ok is inuyasha the janitor or a teen student? cause in the first chapter thats who I thought it was?
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 04:39 CDT
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it looks to be a good story , a bit fast though you could slow it down and stretch out the chapters to make it longer I am not saying this to be mean just a avid reader voicing her thoughts anywho looking forward to more
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