Title: Enjoyable Reviewed By:Loveless Rapture [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2012 23:10 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I have given the first chapter a go and have found it to be intruiging. I love the style of your writing and the way you captured Kaname's and Yuki's feelings for each other by how they say each other's names. Now, I wished to see you describe the setting more. Was it cold in the room or time for bed? Also, I would've liked to see Kaname and Yuki express their love through actions. Did kaname stroke Yuki's cheek with the pad of his thumb while beneath the sheets? Well thanks for the fic I rather enjoyed it.
