| "The Vampyre Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: November 07, 2002 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I know who she's gonna see and he's no shrink. He's...he's...oh no poor Bulma. You're gonna drive me insane. You have to update please asap!! |
Reviewed By: kia On: October 28, 2002 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very nice! well-written and original...do update soon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 12, 2002 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been so looking forward to this update and it proved to be very interesting. Poor Goku and Vegeta, losing their village like that, and we still don't know about CC and Akuma (so you decided to use it eh?). I can't believe Bulma is that naive. Don't get me wrong, I love the way she isn't terrified of V/G, and sees this new developement as a way to spice up her life. It looks like Veggie is starting to notice Bulma ^_~. Can't wait to see what else you have planned. Great chap!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great, update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: vin On: August 17, 2002 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurrah more for me to read but alas i have run out and again i need more |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 17, 2002 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you made my night! I was hoping that you had updated and you read my mind and here it is ^_^. I'm glad that my little review got you to put up another chap. The last K/CC part was so sad, and I'd love to know who the low life is that killed her. What I think is funny is that K/V told Bulma who they are and she doesn't believe them-LOL!! Of course I can't wait to find out more about their past and about what happened to Veggie. Oh yeah, as far as a name goes for that scumbag, I was thinking "Akuma" (jap for satan) or "Zabulus" (latin for satan). Originally I thought about the name "Dracule", but that would've been too obvious. Anywho, I loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for our fave trio. Good job!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 00:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I really want to know what happens next! This was great! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 13, 2002 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes! You've got a winner here. I'm hooked, so I hope you'll update soon ^_^. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep up the good work. When does the nexy chapter comes?? |
Reviewed By: no one On: August 10, 2002 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I have high standards when it comes to style of writing (though I would grade myself a 7 on a lot of my own writings) and spelling/grammar. But I think you're a really good fan fiction writer. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story (and "Any Woman, [etc.]") ends up. |
Reviewed By: Jen Briefs (Too lazy to sign in) On: August 07, 2002 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! And yet again to congradulate you on another WONDERFUL story, that I hope you can e-mail me updates on ^____^
Ooooo I can't wait for the next chapter, THANKIES
Peace,
~Jen |
Reviewed By: Angel On: August 07, 2002 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This si awsome post more!!! |
Reviewed By: vin On: August 07, 2002 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way cool you really need to write some more or i just might go insane. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! I like it so far. Please update. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 10:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
me again!! Nice chappie!! I really like vampires and this story is very interesting. Keep up the good work! |
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