| "Beautiful Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hiei'sLilDevil On: May 01, 2011 14:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awsome!! I love the KagomeXHiei pairing and this is becoming my new favorite story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Talia_Naeva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2011 13:47 EDT
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Interesting, I want to see what Hiei saw through his dragon. |
Reviewed By: wren On: March 30, 2011 18:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is amazing!! please write more. You said that writing reviews would make you write faster so this is mine. You are wonderful thank you!!! |
Reviewed By: inuyashafan2010 On: March 30, 2011 14:41 EDT
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I am enjoying is story and I am a little impatiencet(spell check). So can you please hurry so that I can know what happens next. Thannk you very much!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2011 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Ring Ring* Hello? No, I cant make it, sorry. What's that? What am I donig instead? Oh, I'm reading this AWESOME story! Yeah, I just cant be pulled away;in fact I just read another brilliant chapter and I can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: DawnFire_ice On: March 29, 2011 07:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic so far. As a fellow fan of the Kagome Hiei pairing i thought that your characterization was fantastic, well done! I can't wait to read more! I loved your use of the dragon. He is a fun element isn't he...^_^ I hope that you will check out my story as well...i would love to get your opinion on it... |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2011 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I was so excited when I saw the update! THis chapter was AMAZING! I love that you updated so quickly and that you said that you wanted to beat the 11 days! Love love love it!!! |
Title: Wigi
Reviewed By: Wigi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2011 17:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great! Keep up the good work. Would like to see more. |
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2011 13:39 EST
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definately an interesting story. A few grammer errors. One that stood out and bugged me the most was calling Hiei her nightly visitor. Nightly implies he was there every night. So was he there just once or was he there every night since the first? I do hope you continue with it though as the storyline is very captivating. |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2011 18:10 EST
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Ahhhhhhhhh! This story is going to rock! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: lovelyswagify [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2011 08:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. There is an undercurrent of intensity so keep writing. I'm wondering if there will be a hint of kurama liking Kagome...that would be interesting. But ur the author, surprise us readers with your awesomeness! |
Reviewed By: kjpann On: February 18, 2011 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it. pls continue |
Title: Good
Reviewed By: Wigi2 On: February 17, 2011 18:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like to write much, but it was good, I would like to read more. |
Reviewed By: mochie On: February 04, 2011 08:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic had a very interesting and actual possibility to have these two interconnect. I really enjoyed the story. I would really like to read on and see both characters develop into stronger characters then have them rejoin each other later, definitely not too soon. Great first writing! I can't wait to read more!!! |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2011 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story, from what i was able to read sounds like it can very very good! This story sounds so exciting! Please continue this story! |
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