| "The Secret Club" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Title: Another great chapter
Reviewed By: Sweet puppy On: March 26, 2011 07:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading the current chapters of your story The Secret Club. Ya! Inuyasha and Kagome finally meet. Hummm it looks like Kagome refused Inuyasha and wants to play hard to get. Boy is inuyasha in for it now. You have a lot of tallent and its a very creative story. Also I think that it would be funny and a good plot twist if your brought Hojo into the story and made him into a local playboy or a porn star who frequents the club and takes a liking to Kagome as well, or you could make him into a goody goody boy who finds out about Kagome and what she does at the club. Then he wants to get her to start dating him and has to compete with Inuyasha for Kagome's affections. Just a suggestion. Something to further spice up the story Anyway it was just a suggestion update soon please. Cheers Puppy ears |
Title: Different
Reviewed By: Mystified Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2011 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I cannot wait for you to write more. This story is so different that it's captured my attention completely. I've never seen a story like this, and I'm dying to know how it ends! Please, please update frequently! Great job, keep it up! :) |
Reviewed By: Kazan On: March 24, 2011 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, excited to see how Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship develops, and what's it going to be like! It's a new plot, definitely. I can't wait |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha's meeting was short... sango and miroku don't want kagome mixing up with inuyasha - why?... looks like kagome's first day on the job at the club was quite busy... what is inuyasha planning to do?... inuyasha was the one who took kagome in the end of the chapter - to where?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2011 18:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Interesting concept and well written. Yep, Kouga's a bit of a shit and I love that he not only was trying to pump her for money, but also to pimp her as well. We'll see what Inuyasha has planned for her and what the year of sex will do to her attitude. |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2011 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I saw that there was a new chapter I was like, YES!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it as usual! I hope you update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2011 15:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that sango and miroku have gotten kagome more involved with the club now... but kagome did agree to it though... and looks like kagome has finally met inuyasha... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2011 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooHoo.. let the games begin! Wait, they already have! But with Yash, should a whole lot more interesting, ne? w00t! :p |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2011 13:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is getting extremely good, I can just see when Kagome meets Inuyasha I'd be all slomo and like a sexy instrumental song playing, the air thick...oooooh! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2011 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! Never have I read a story with such a different theme to it! Plus there are frequent updates! Time to shower! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2011 04:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome and miroku are spending more time together than miroku with sango... looks like sango went alone to the club... so inuyasha wants to meet kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: Selaite [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 14:08 EST
Comment/Review:
Love this story so far, cold shower needed! xD And anyway you could put spaces in between the sentences? =P |
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2011 12:41 EST
Comment/Review:
wwooooowwww. Hot damn! this is going to turn out to be very interesting i can tell. update soon! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2011 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting story... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2011 12:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL, gonna need a cold shower after that one ~fans self~ nice, can't wait till the next chapter... |
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