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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: INUKAG LOVAH! On: April 06, 2011 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEEEEEEED MORE you are so goood to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Title: MOre MORE MORE
Reviewed By: I lOv this On: April 06, 2011 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please more!!! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2011 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, totally didn't see that one coming! Er...no pun intended, again. And poor Inuyasha, anyway...after all that he was so close. Bummer. But shit, good ears, to not be so distracted that he allowed Kikyou to kill him. I'm laughing now because wherever they go, further away so he can fuck her brains out more, when he eventually comes back to himself, between the two of them they only have his fire-rat robe. Somebody's going to have to go naked! LOL. But somehow I don't think Inuyasha's thinking about that right now. Really looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2011 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you're on a roll. Wasn't expecting another update so soon, though I'm not complaining! Far from it! Sure, there are a few typos here and there, but I'll gladly ignore those in favor of rapid updates when there are some stories out there than seem to drag on forever and a day between chapters. Soooo, looks like the whole "mate" thing officially took, if Kagome can hear his thoughts. This is getting really interesting. Looking forward to the next update! Which I guess won't be that long in coming. Er...no pun intended. Hehehehe |
Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in On: April 05, 2011 21:09 EDT
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Yep, another that can't wait to see Inu's reaction when his demon is done, and how he deals with the fallout. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2011 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree, more chapters! LOL, although this one was very, very good. I can't wait to see Inuyasha's face once his demon side is finally satisfied and receedes, allowing his hanyou mind to surface again. |
Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: April 05, 2011 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More chappies please! :) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! 'Bout damn time, LOL. I don't mean for you as an author, I mean for Inuyasha himself. Should have realized that keeping himself away from her for two nights would have dire side effects. Now if Kagome can just prove herself stronger than your average human by repeatedly surviving getting her brains fucked out, they should be able to live happily ever after, LOL. Really looking forward to the next chapter. |
Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2011 00:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you, Resilience. Like any author, I welcome any reviews because I want to be the best that I can be. There is a reason I haven't done much foreplay in the chapters. :) Anyways, thank you all for the wonderful reviews! |
Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2011 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty fun to read lol. Look in my faves for some of the fics with lots of lemony detail, if you want. There were at least 3 that i thought were really good, and i only have like 8 or 7 faved. but overall, its pretty good. I dont think you have as much detail as YOU think you have though. try adding more foreplay in there. also, you may want to edit some of your chapters lol cuz a few of them have small but major mistaked that made me go wtf? in them. keep up with good work:) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2011 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh ho! Quite a lovely little fic you've got going so far. I am officially addicted. Can't wait for the next installment! |
Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in On: March 31, 2011 21:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I'm hooked! Looking forward to more. Have you read anything by Roxotaku? Nice stuff, that, and beyond hot! |
Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: March 31, 2011 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome so far. Update soon :) |
Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: March 31, 2011 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
im loving that hes fighting his instincts, when he finally decides to give in it will be amazing, please update as soon as possible |
Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2011 12:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
The suppression of his desires and her misunderstanding of his issues (not her fault, just saying) make for a very erotic encounter. It's going to get worse before it gets better, no? Not to sound too sadistic, but I hope so. Looking forward to Kikyou adding to the mix. Hopefully not in a villainous way, in fact she could be a help to Kagome if they could talk to each other. I notice Shippo's not here, hopefully off training in the kitsune arts? If and when he is there, the jig is up for their secret fucks. Unless she offers him a serious bribe... Looking forward to more and I really enjoy how you write the sex scenes. |
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