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| "Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Even if it turns out Kagura and Sesshoumaru hadn't actually done anything - and why else would she have been there? - he should know better than to allow her at the house. Out of respect for Kagome, even if he just wanted to talk to Kagura he should do it elsewhere. And the nerve of her! Knocking Kagome out of that tree. Did Sesshoumaru even care or wonder about how Kagome was all scratched up? Bastard. I am a little confused though, when 'hanyou' Inuyasha mentioned being Sesshoumaru's brother, because I thought he was pretending that he wasn't related? He already admitted as a human to being Sesshoumaru's brother, which J Luc Pitard is right in that it shouldn't be possible, though if Kagome didn't think to question it then hey, lucky for Inuyasha. But how can 'hanyou' Inuyasha have Sesshoumaru as his only brother, and 'human' Inuyasha have Sesshoumaru as his only brother, without the two Inuyashas being related to each other as well? I suppose...if on the one side they were half-siblings through the same mother, and on the other side half-siblings through the same father, it would technically be possible, but wasn't the suggestion of "none that I claim" to the question of siblings in reference to Sesshoumaru's promiscuous father? Surely his mother hadn't slept around with anybody else. Ah well, but I'm thinking too deeply on it, I think. It's good if it doesn't make sense if you did that on purpose because Inuyasha is going to get caught in his lie as it dawns on Kagome. At any rate, I still love this story regardless, and I'm super looking forward to the next update! | Title: WooHoo!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SOOO loving this! Yea, I am!:P Love the premise of it and the way you've written Yash is simply awesome - the rotten Lil stinker, lol. And should be interesting on how he wins over the Lively Miko, in both his forms, and right under his dear brothers nose, too. Lol.. ah yesh, am total lovin' it! Until next install, update when ya can! ;) | Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2011 11:14 EDT
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Thank you all for the wonderful reviews! J Luc Pitard, yes, throw in an idea that you'd like for me to MAYBE put into one of the chapters. I'm not promising to do it if the idea doesn't speak to me in the way the story needs to go...but I welcome any ideas my fans want to see. Keep in mind I'm not promising to add anything. If I do, I will put in a note giving the credit to whomever and if I don't, then I don't. But thank you all! You all make it easier to write this story! | Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2011 10:04 EDT
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Poor Kagome! The idea that Sesshoumaru has a human half brother is... not exactly possible seeing as he's a full demon, but since both of them accepted it, she's not questioning it? I love their interactions, both the human and demon side of Inuyasha playing their mind games with Kagome. I imagine both will end up falling deeper in love than they expect. Then everyone will have some major choices to make. Hopefully, it will all end messily (can I put in a vote for a moresome scene, before all is said and done?) and then happily ever after with K/I and S/Kagura. Keep on keeping on!! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2011 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let the games begin, indeed. Even though he's still a pervert in his human form, something tells me his little plan is going to end up backfiring. Oh, he might actually seduce Kagome, eventually, but if he's going to be having regular contact with her on his human nights, I get the feeling he's going to wind up with more than he bargained for. Of course stupid Sesshoumaru would have to go and be all possessive. He doesn't love Kagome, he doesn't even really want Kagome, and he had put off Mating her as long as possible before finally relenting for the good of the country, but yet she's 'his' and nobody can take her away from him. Typical. Still, I think when Inuyasha eventually steals her away, if he can just stop and think for two seconds, Sesshoumaru will realize that giving Kagome to Inuyasha will mean that he and Kagura can have their own happy ending. I am definitely also a Sess/Kagura fan, so I love that little side plot, as well...primarily for the sake of the couple, but also because it provides evidence that Kagome is not truly his after all, despite the fact that the Mating took. She's not really supposed to be his Mate, even though she presently, technically is. But of course, we can't just hand her over to Inuyasha while he only wants to score her and then probably move on once he gets bored. He's got to inadvertently fall in love with her first. Really looking forward to how this is all unfolding! Keep up the awesome work! | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: April 15, 2011 06:22 EDT
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Ah, yes, let the games begin! | Reviewed By: Somber On: April 15, 2011 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say, this story has got me hooked! Loooove the whole Kagura/Sesshomaru tryst going on! I know it's kinda more about Inuyasha and Kagome, (which is a pairing I love and really like the diffrent why you're having them come together... and that Inuyasha's a bit...naughtier in this fic lol...) but I'm also I huge Kagura/Sessh fan and find there isn't many good fics out there with them together so I', really enjoying this! Pleeeease keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for another chap! | Reviewed By: Somber On: April 15, 2011 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say, this story has got me hooked! Loooove the whole Kagura/Sesshomaru tryst going on! I know it's kinda more about Inuyasha and Kagome, (which is a pairing I love and really like the diffrent why you're having them come together... and that Inuyasha's a bit...naughtier in this fic lol...) but I'm also I huge Kagura/Sessh fan and find there isn't many good fics out there with them together so I', really enjoying this! Pleeeease keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for another chap! | Title: SoulSistersWriters@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this story interesting to say the least. Keep up the great work and I love the way InuYasha is...messing with her. =) | Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How to describe what I'm thinking? I just love this fic! The plotline is intriguing and I absolutely adore Inuyasha's naughty side. Their banter has me continuously smiling and laughing (luckily my roommate has headphones in). Can't wait to see what Inuyasha has planned for Kagome and how that all plays out. I know it was already said, but do just watch out for spelling and such. I'm sure you meant "racist", not "raciest". Do continue with your style of alternating between perspectives though. It truly does add an intimate connection to the characters, which I always love in a good fic. Please update soon! | Reviewed By: Mystified Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic so far! Please write more soon! :) | Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 17:30 EDT
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OMG, I just got to the end of chapter five and now I'm REALLY hooked! What's Sesshoumaru going to do to Inuyasha! Is there going to be a war! And what will Kagome do when she finds out the truth about who Inuyasha really is! AND I WANT SESSHOUMARU TO BE MATES WITH KAGURA DAMMIT! Update soon please or my brain's going to implode from the curiosity! | Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOh, forbidden love or sex with complications...sexy. I REALLY like how Sesshoumaru and Kagura have their little power play in the bedroom and I'm curious to see where Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is going to go, especially with Sesshoumaru there. Also, I'm SO glad you put Sess and Kagura together, because they WORK and not SessRin...ew. I'm hooked! It's rare for me to find a fic I enjoy but the sex scenes are hot and power play and backdrop of responsibilities are interesting. I would only say be mindful of your working. It's conscience, not conscious. It's an easy thing to miss, but annoying thing to read, so to keep readers coming, try to work on that, because this story is too intriguing to leave because of that kind of small thing. Looking forward to new chapters. Peace. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2011 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm not confused, I think this is going awesomely. Clearly, Inuyasha can suddenly, somehow just sense that he is meant for Kagome, although somehow I get the feeling that happened a bit too easily so probably when he turns hanyou again he's going to initially chalk it up to his lame human emotions and try to convince himself he only wants to fuck her. Still, he knows about the prophecy, one point...he was one of the four who could do it, two points...and we already know from Sesshoumaru's thoughts that if she were unfaithful to him it would screw everything up unless somebody else mated her. Well then, problem solved! I shall still thoroughly enjoy the rollercoaster as it all unravels. =) | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: April 08, 2011 20:26 EDT
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Wonderful! I am pleasantly surprised by the quickness of the updates and the thoughtfulness involved. By splitting events and their conclusions into different chapters you manage to weave a intricate plot affected drastically by Force majeure, i.e. Act of God. The split between what Kagome and Sesshoumaru deem appropriate is already to be seen. Difference of opinions regarding core values is usually one of the reasons couples split up, or in this case, mates. The Prophecy is a bit unfair to Kagome, though... anyway, just out curiousity, while the Prophecy statest that Kagome cannot have physical relations wiht others, but what does it say about her heart? Anyway, I'm looking eagerly forward to the next chapter. Good luck writing, and I hope to see an update soon! | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
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