| "The Solitary Twin" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Waiting for Love On: April 15, 2012 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart has been broken once again. I fall in love with the story and it hasn't even been updated on this site or your aff.net account in quite some time. This fanfic really amazed me in terms of the dynamics between the characters and the twists of the plot. Usually I loathe OC's and I didn't even realize there was one in your story until I started reading (I don't like reading summaries, I prefer to be surprised). Now, I can't see the story going on without her and her character is so unpredictable. You have become an official addition to the list of authors that I hate because the story is so darn good, but it remains unfinished for long periods of time. Yet, I can never resist checking back every few weeks to see if my dreams have come true. Please finish the story! It is rare for me to read a story that is so amazing that I literally LOL or get so wrapped up that I forget the time and end up staying up to ungodly hours of the night to finish reading. I beg you, please finish the story! This love story has got me all twisted inside waiting to see what happens. Please don't keep me waiting for too long :) |
Title: Please continue writing
Reviewed By: Spygurl155 On: October 08, 2011 14:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I enjoyed reading The Solitary Twin so much that I read all that there was in one day. I Hope you will continue to add more chapters on to the story soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! |
Reviewed By: VK On: June 10, 2011 11:40 EDT
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guess what happene d! the site ate my review!now im reviewing like this! aniwho!loved this chap!i found yuzuhas thoughts interesting since alot of fict writers dont go into her like that. please dont have her separating the twins! i would die if she does! so glad shes saaaaaaaving etsu though! lmaof. that girl has no idea whats shes in for with the twins hating her guts and all. |
Reviewed By: aurora16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 21:37 EDT
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i loved it! im glad yuzuha caught her mom. that was terrible. im looking forward to seeing what happenes next! thank you so super much for teh wonderful update! cyber ice cream sundaes to you |
Reviewed By: WoWs On: June 05, 2011 14:40 EDT
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I loooved the threeway kissing part. Them having her tied up and forcing her to watch them making out and then Hikaru........ Man thats so hott! |
Reviewed By: lanaris On: June 01, 2011 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i was worrying about you not updating your hichi/hime fic reflections so whn i saw this i started reading and i'm hooked!! its probably smuttier than your other stuff. plz update soooon! |
Reviewed By: vanillakisses1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2011 13:48 EDT
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i liked tamaki alot in this chapter., motly since you had etsu bite him in the fight!! i could just piciture him screaming like a girl at that!!! but im worried abiout what could happen now that those girls know about hika and kao and etsu doing things to each other. whats going to happen to them??? |
Reviewed By: llllloooo On: May 28, 2011 14:30 EDT
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i really liked the one before this one because of how everybody got involved and the emotions they were going through. i love all the chapters, but that one had a lot of emotion to it. thats what i think i guess. update soon please |
Reviewed By: aurora16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2011 08:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! you did wonderfully,. i'm glad i asked for the link from fanfic. but honestly, i dont know how many would report you. ive read some really bad lemons on fanfic before...a lot. like with rape and stuff afd theyre still up. but to each her own. thanks so much for this! it was good. i look forward to more once again. cyber ice cream cake to you |
Title: you know what
Reviewed By: vanillakisses1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2011 16:46 EDT
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this stupid ass site only lets me go to the x rated stuff if i am signed in or have a direct link to it.wtf?? what a load of shiet!and honey, your yaoi amazes me! you alwasy complain about not knowing how to write it and here i see some stuff that even i coulnt have come up with if i tried. about a dark hunny. sounds good. i've read sme dakr hunny with mori but none with haru since you know i cant stand ehr already. could you maybe use renge or some other girl othe r than haru? i think i can read some het if its full of kink.i kinda looked at your hichihime fic reflection and the bondage oral raping chapter has messed my little ehead up. |
Reviewed By: Anon11 On: May 18, 2011 06:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A friend sugested this and I like it but theres something I don't like about this story. All the boy with boy thing. I thought they would be focusing on getting the girl and so far all they are doing is getting into each other's pants and chasing her off. I'm not a fan of yaoi so can you kind of minimize the twincest for a bit? I'm not saying it to be mean, but I like OC fan fiction and this is one is very good. |
Reviewed By: vanillakisses1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2011 16:36 EDT
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i liked how you got hikarus and kaoru's feelings all in this. hikakao ftw!their feelins are so beautiful and like always etsu cracks me up.and im okay if you put some haruhi stuff as lng as she aint in some all bouys love her crap wit lime. that stuff drives me up the wall. |
Reviewed By: vanillakisses1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2011 09:21 EDT
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by the ways that is my member account. i had it but never used it. |
Reviewed By: vanillakisses1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2011 09:20 EDT
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please! i beg no haru-chan!i can't stand her already! do a tamaxkyo with tamaki as the seme but leave haru out of it because she just bugs the snot outa me with her stupidass attitude. i like etsu much better and i nearly hate you fo rmaking me like an oc so much!! and the fight scene came as a surprise since alot of wtiers like making their ocs know martialarts and all that jazziness and you made etsu into a girly catfighter! i laughed at that though i felt bad for hikaru getting beat down like that. write more soon and i'm still waiting for the smexxy 3some! |
Reviewed By: VK On: May 02, 2011 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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im so glad you took the story here. theres something wrong aat aff athat i can't get in at times to see updates. c ya.update! |
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