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| "Castaways" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | Title: Perfect! ❤️
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2024 18:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just wonderful in every which way. You have blown me away once
again! Such an incredible story!!! I'm actually crying right now
lol
| Reviewed By: Cicera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2012 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. There is so much detail! I can't believe I read EVERY WORD in ONE night! The story line was not disappointing, you made being stranded on an island very interesting. OF course you would need to be rescued. It was pretty funny too, but I find that with most of your stories that I've read. They can be serious, funny, be WAFF and PWP at the same time. This was a great story. You gave them feel and not just the usual Inuyasha's a business man and has been living for 500+ years and that's it. You gave him a dynamic persona that was more than just a billioniare, playboy, philanthropist, well a little less love towards actual humans and full demons who don't like him. Kagome I loved the background you gave her. The usual sweet loving girl we see in the anime but with a touch more than just someone who didn't leave home and explored the world. This was truly a great read! | Reviewed By: mamosere On: May 18, 2012 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I've enjoyed reading this. For an alternate universe this is really good, one of the best i ever read. I really love reading all of your stories, i still got more to read. I would like to thank you once again for sharing your great stories with us. | Reviewed By: MuffinChick On: November 23, 2011 08:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story wad amazing!!! | Title: Thanks SG!!
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2011 14:11 PDT
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I am so happy that my review made a difference!!! I am so happy others can enjoy this elsewhere now!!! Like I said...great work and I hope others can appreciate it now too!!! | Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan(nli) On: August 26, 2011 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahh. There's so many great things I can say about this story, but I just don't know where to begin ^^ First, the set up. The chemsitry between Kag and Inu was great from the offset. I loved their banter and barbs, made me laugh out loud several times!! The treatment of the crash was interesting. Even though slightly heartless, it was true...you would save your own life, if you could. I felt you kept them both very in character. I could totally see the dialogue being true to them. The smut was also handled out really well! There was no overused scenarios, and i really enjoyed the truth and dare situation! All in all, a fantastic story, well deserving in it's awards! My only piece of con crit is sometimes your paragraphs were a bit too long! But apart from that, fab ^^ 10/10!! | Title: Beyond Excellent
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2011 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful fic!!!! I could not stop reading and it was well written and kept me interested the whole time. Only complaint?? I wish there was more!!!! If you do not have this on fanfiction.net I implore you to add it....this should be shared all over!!!! | Reviewed By: KagomesDarkHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2011 01:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved this story and was sad to see it end. I truly love all your works but i do hope even if this story is over that maybe there is hope that you would make a book 2. | Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: July 24, 2011 06:34 PDT
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Omfggg you never cease to amaze me with the creative, wonderful stories you always manage to come up with. They're talented and so full of emotion, and it always leaves me feeling warm and fuzzy inside |D | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 02:11 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2011-2/june-2011/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=98 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=98 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 01:27 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2011-2/june-2011/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=98 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=98 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2011 11:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another excellent fic from you. Wow, your style and skill just keep getting better and better, i'm envious. Keep up the good work! | Title: Congrats!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 11:12 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 10:42 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2011 03:34 PDT
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That was a fun read. I didn't expect you to get as deep as the bonding thing. But the romantic in me believes in love at first sight, or first date, or first f**k, as the case may be. And I prefer it when bonding is at least somewhat out of the control of the people involved; it makes it seem more realistic that way. You pulled off the three languages in a way that was easy to follow. The truth or dare thing was cute; I guess adults can still play it. It reminded me of yet another scene from south park (I swear they've done everything on that show). Randy and Sharon Marsh have broken up but Stan arranges a meeting for them in his clubhouse. Sharon ends up daring Randy to "Do me, right here in the clubhouse." So that part was fun to read. I won't lie; I did skim some paragraphs in the middle of the story about Inuyasha's family business, and the details they were telling to each other. I know why you put those details in there, but I could tell most of them wouldn't come up in the story again, and I didn't have the attention span at the time. :) I think you could have condensed that section a bit, but you didn't have to. It wasn't rambling; everything you said went toward showing how much they were telling about each other. Overall, this was thrilling and touching and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the AU magic! | Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2011 13:13 PDT
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Just finished chapter 1. I wanted to compliment you on really tying up all the potential loose ends. A couple times I thought you missed a detail, but then you would address it in the next paragraph. I can tell I'm going to really get into this story. One of my favorite fanfictions ever is called "Black and Blue Lagoon," (it's a Black Lagoon fanfiction) and it's also a stranded-on-an-island story. Can't wait for the rest of yours! | Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 (NLI) On: May 22, 2011 21:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds like my kind of vacation... ;) Brilliant, well-played, superb read. Worth staying up until 4AM to finish reading. Can't wait to see what's next! | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2011 02:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as always. Loved the universe you created, seen it before but never as well done as you. You did an excellent job with the whole stranded on an island, the best I've ever read. Excellent characterization and descriptions. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. | Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2011 18:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I loved the story line, the humor, the romance... I loved it all! I'm always glad to read another one of your stories; they always put a smile on my face! :) | Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2011 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... nice happy ending... good job... great work! | Reviewed By: Dei Purple On: May 18, 2011 00:37 PDT
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This was a wonderful story. I loved it!!!!! | Title: Very Nice
Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice little (well, not quite so little lol) addition to my day! This was truly a pleasure to read. Really, the only constructive criticism I have is to say watch your homophones, but, as always, you're a tremendously talented writer! I especially loved the quick wit you gave Kagome and Inuyasha--very entertaining to read. I always look forward to the things you write, and this certainly did not disappoint. Keep up the awesome work! | Title: Lovely!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 14:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like their characters in this. From his annoyance at her staring to his getting off on her watching him get off, Inuyasha is a grown up version of his teen-ish self from the manga. Yeah, he's lived a very different life in your story and his rough edges are much more polished, but I think his essence remains true. Plus he's sexy. Kagome's character is- likewise- more mature. Okay, so the her sexual adventurism surprised me. It wasn't bad at all, just surprising. Her basic nature remained unchanged. In fact, she benefits from losing the insecure "does he love Kikyou more than me" thing. Mad props to you for letting him love Kikyou and not making her into a villain! In fact, this story is mercifully free of villains (aside from a certain dead dragon and the concept of racism or specie-ism.) The family dynamic with Sesshoumaru having 300+ years in which he both hated and loved his brother, as evidenced in his disheveled appearance on an unnamed island. All very well written. | Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 00:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was bored, looking for a nice read to pass the time, and ended up reading your whole story in one sitting. Needless to say, I really loved it! Your writing style and story building techniques made this one of my now-favorite AU stories. | Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2011 20:49 PDT
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Awwww... Sweet! Loved it! :-) I must say that I loved this version of bonding much better than the old 'blood and fangs' routine. Kudos for that! Thanks for writing. | Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm, not signed in...at this moment On: May 16, 2011 20:39 PDT
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I love your work, I love strong female leads, I love InuYasha, and I grieve that I am too old and not an anime charactor so I can't be his Miko, LOL. I have been a fan of your work for years, and love your sassy, humor filled stories. It is good to see your voice again. Until the next time. | Reviewed By: SherryCHEN On: May 16, 2011 11:50 PDT
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LOL i just HAD to give you props for making inuyasha wearing a "red naruto shirt". XD |
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