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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 18:53 CDT
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::giggles:: i LOVE how you endedd this fic. hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 00:05 CST
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That had me laughing out loud by the end. That was great but I really could've used a longer fic - meaning through the night and up to when the two next meet up with Yusuke and Kuwabara.
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Reviewed By: Kitsunes Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow that was good, a bit disturbing but good, keep up the good work
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Title: sryyyy
Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:28 CST
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hey! something got cut off on mah last review!! sry if im doin it twice- buh i ment 2 sey keep ritin.... that goes in between "i wish there wuz more buh life sucks" and that "escpicall bout this pair" -fox agan
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it. it wuz so well writen. alot of writers have good stories n al, buh their structure n shyt sucks. this wuz great.......... i loved it rite down to the last period. i wish there wuz more buh life sucks. ( espescially bout this pair. its mah fav!!) Fox- ( tecnically mah names foxflame, buh i need abrivations her n ther:) )
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 08:14 CDT
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Oh and i forgot to ask. Lemon? plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz. ;.; pretty please? |
Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoutly love all of your fics. This one was written great, though i have heard the oh too familiar plot.
--Ally Hearts |
Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 14:38 CDT
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VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 12:53 CDT
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where is the rest? No lemon? aww....still good!!! ^_^_^_^_^
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: Kitty-yasha On: July 21, 2003 21:55 CDT
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Extremely good.. 'nuff said great job i loved it. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang it, I'm SO gonna kick MM for having their rating choices so low...
This fic was actually pretty damn good :) It flowed very smoothly, and your details to characterization was beautiful... Not everyone puts so much work into the characters as to actually let us know what they're doing, how their feeling, their little mannerisms... etc, etc.
I was a little dissapointed that you didn't write a lemon for this, but I did like the way you ended it (if that makes any sense... *smirk*)
Lemon is always a good thing, but the cut off just seemed to fit the air of the fic ^_^
All and all, you did a wonderful job! |
Reviewed By: KXH4eva On: March 09, 2003 12:12 CST
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KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! MORE!!! c'mon! that was so cute... and Kurama and Hiei playing strip poker *drools at image* |
Reviewed By: Shuuichi Minamino On: February 25, 2003 23:40 CST
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I love fics with Hiei and Kurama paired together! very nice, but I thought that Yuusuke was a real prick in the beginning. This was nice anyway. |
Reviewed By: Thorn On: February 15, 2003 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I want to say. This fic is great. I love all fics that have a romance with Hiei and Kurama. Though, I think you need to add more sexual things. I'm sorry, I'm perverted, But I love the pairing. I based my life around Kurama and Hiei. Oh yeah. If anyone can play a good Hiei in Role Playing. Please Contact me a RoseWarrior24@cs.com. Thank you. |
Reviewed By: Daemon On: November 10, 2002 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur fics |
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