Title: I wonder, where this is going?
Reviewed By: Sekare On: December 06, 2012 10:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as I despise it to disappoint you, it's not your story, it's the fandom. I think, mainly the age of the fandom than anything else, but still. Your story's nice to read up until now, though it's hard to say more so close to the beginning. English isn't my first language either(that's German), so it probably isn't saying anything, but your language skills don't take away from the feeling of your story for me. There were a few spelling things, where you mixed the letters, but that happens without a beta and it wasn't to terrible. Let's see, if there is coming more and where this is going and maybe I can say more after the next chapter. greetings,Jade |
