| "Allies with Benefits" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Cliffhanger?!
Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2018 20:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Literally read this all in one day, with having to work a full day.
Super sad I reached the end! Can't wait to see the next chapter! A
few inconsistencies with Sesshomaru's arm. Like how would he draw a
bow with one arm? He wraps her in his arm and then he's playing
with her on the ground but holding himself up at the same time? But
I love this story! Keep it up!
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Title: More please to
Reviewed By: Alesia1318 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2017 07:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to read more it definitely a new favorite of mine to I
love them together and can't wait to read about inuyasha's tantrum
when he finds out
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Title: More Please
Reviewed By: AimeeKisuragiSama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2017 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon. I really like this story. Its a new
favorite. I'll follow you to the end so please update soon....can't
wait to read what happens next
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Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: April 07, 2012 13:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
since kagome thought of sesshomaru why not have him as her secret lover! im sure he can keep a secret and fucking wouldnt be to bad would it? i mean wouldnt it be more exciding to fuck him than hojo!oh god hojo soooooo fucking boring!! |
