| "FMLYHM" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Title: Perfect!
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2024 17:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no words. So fucking good!
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Title: Best Lemon - Congrats!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2012 20:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the July 2012 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ This terms' Fiction/Artwork Winners List can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2012-2/july-2012-2/ Fiction Awards for this term, July 2012, may be found here. http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=105 All awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php **You may receive this notice more than once if you've won multiple awards. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2012 19:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. |
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2012 18:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
What can I say...you are the BOMB!!! This sequel was so good. I love how they brought Rin into it because she was the one to bring their emotions to the fore. It was beautifully told as only you can tell it. The only qualm I had was that there was no in depth sex scene to tide us over until your next story...hehehe. What can I say, I'm into smut...hehehe. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read your next story. Many hugs;-) |
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2012 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now that was a fun development. Excellent continuation! |
Title: Thank You!
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat On: June 05, 2012 03:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? There is really no words to say thank you for continuing to create wonderful stories for us to read! Having expanded this with an extra chapter was like putting a cherry on the top, making it more the sweeter! Much love sent your way! |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2012 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!!!!1 too short I didn't want it to stop!!! |
Reviewed By: N1ta On: April 10, 2012 21:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. |
Title: Sexy!
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat On: April 03, 2012 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you gift us with a wonderful tale of ardent passion and desire! Not only was it well crafted, but beautifully told! You can at moments feel the raw animal desire that those two share, the heat that seems to burn everything like a blaze, and the powerful union that they experience and could never happen away from each other! I have to confess to being left panting at times, feeling as if my breath was taken away from me, and I have to say, that is powerful! Every detail, every moment was relished and once again, I have to thank you for continuing to create magic for all of us fans! Thank you so much! Best Wishes: MidCat |
Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2012 10:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
It seems I am not alone in thinking this needs a sequel. Although, while everyone else is wanting to see them confess, which is certainly important, I don’t think that should be the major premise of it. What I could see happening here is that now that they want to be together openly, they still are trying to keep it secret from their friends. As they discussed “they would try to gradually work up not ‘hating’ each other any more in public, so that Sango and Miroku could each think they’d gradually come around, and then they could ‘start dating’ and eventually become boyfriend and girlfriend.” The only problem is Sango and Miroku had decided “that they would never again force their friends to eat lunch together in public.” Which means that they aren’t being given the opportunity to finally play nice. Additionally what would happen if Miroku and Sango had a fight? Suddenly they would not be spending time together, which means that Inuyasha and Kagome wouldn’t be able to sneak around when they are wanting to see each other. I also think that for both Inuyasha’s and Rin’s sanity he needs to introduce Kagome to Rin before the baby gets here so she can have at least one female friend. Feeling isolated and pregnant does not sound like a good combination. |
Title: CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2012 06:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ you should REALLY continue this story, I LOVED it... Please continue this... I wanna see Sango and Miroku's reactions |
Reviewed By: bluerose3514 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2012 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this a few days ago, just getting around to reviewing. *Don't shoot! Lol* Talk about steamy! Great job, this story caught me off guard. |
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2012 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again! Another AWESOME story to add to my collection. I would soooo love it if you continued this story a little bit. I loved the hot and steamy sex scenes, nothing wrong with a little bit of raunch...hehehe. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for your next story. Many hugs!!! |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: April 01, 2012 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I love it, I LOVE it! had my eyes glued from the beginning and pissed myself laughing when poor Rin called haha OOo please do a in the future one shot of this XD |
Title: Good fun!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2012 17:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loved this! I could see the twist, but still loved the way it built. The smexy bits were smoldering and Rin's call had me laughing. It was so wonderfully misunderstood. |
Reviewed By: Cricket42(not signed in) On: April 01, 2012 16:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it! Like always! I think you should continue. Do a few years down the road piece. Sango and Miroku are getting married and at the bachelor/bachelorette parties they confess. Or something like that. Keep up the good work! ~Cricket42 |
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2012 16:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweetness. It worked a little like friends with benefits, or in this case it's enemies with benefits. And in many cases, the benefits turn into feelings. I thought it was funny the way they just hated each others guts at first. Then the phone call from Rin, that made me laugh out loud. Great job, a load of laughs. ;) |
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2012 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun story. Ah, what happens when you talk yourself into a corner...LOL. But true love prevails...what a nice bit o' smex! |
