| "Controling Interest" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2012 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hadn't noticed you posted the story here too. I really love it, but I hope that just like in Bunny's Delight Ranma will be able to turn the tables on hs captors. I'm especially happy thta Nabiki got caught. I hope there'll be a lot of humiliation for her to come. |
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2012 02:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm so glad that you are back. Enjoyment Factor is so loy because of 'mindfucking Ranma' though that is only the first Chapter and Ranma enjoyed herself there at least. Must have been some gruesome film there for that happening. I hope that Ranma gets back at them sooo much as well that you continue your other Ranma fanfics. Especially 'Playing with Ranma' and 'Princess of the Moon'. Please update soon!!! |
Title: Great
Reviewed By: Rowinx On: May 16, 2012 23:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to the story their havent been enough ranma stories released lately. |
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