| "Controling Interest" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: jo On: September 10, 2012 18:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sexy. |
Title: Ho-Hum
Reviewed By: Gilbert On: July 26, 2012 08:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is as far I got, and I didn't get far into this one. As one-shots, I suppose, they're okay. And interconnecting them was a nice twist. Overall, however...they're rather disappointing, especially Ranma, as they all just appear to be one-shots of the writer essentially 'killing off' the characters and turning them all into contentedly mindless sex-addicts. |
Title: Lesbian
Reviewed By: Gilbert On: July 26, 2012 08:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's rather disappointing that Nabiki appears to be just as much of a lesbian as Ranma-chan, wherein her first thought of Ranma in a sexual manner is in his cursed form. |
Title: It works
Reviewed By: Gilbert On: July 26, 2012 08:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, somehow this works for Akane... I can just picture her becoming a porn actress (even knowingly, rather than being mind-controled into it). Still, it was unclear as to whether or not she'd ever engaged in any sexual activities with Ranma, although it was clear that this wasn't her first "performance". |
Title: Oversights
Reviewed By: Gilbert On: July 26, 2012 07:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
Never really cared for those fics that subject Ranma to being 'mind-fucked' and 'programmed', as they all succeed far too quickly and easily to make any later breaking of said programming even remotely believable. So, the company did a background check on Ranma Tendo? Apparently, it was an extremely poor one, or they would have known that there is no Ranma Tendo (unless Ranma married one and it has yet to be revealed). There is also the matter of how they missed the Jusenkyo curse. They did a psychological evaluation? When, and who did it? The janitor? Because it must have holes in that evaluation that you could throw the Astrodome through. The only saving grace, so far in this set up, is that Ranma hasn't expressed a desire, yet, for sex with a male, only females. But I fear that won't be long in appearing. |
Title: shampoo
Reviewed By: jo On: June 25, 2012 05:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, I would love to see either shampoo or more ranma-chan. |
Reviewed By: Rowinxx On: June 20, 2012 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter would love to see one with kasumi and ranmachan or at least the separate if your trying to do one girl a chapter. |
Title: Yeah,
Reviewed By: jo On: June 19, 2012 10:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff, hope for more when you get a chance. |
Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2012 02:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved it once again. |
Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2012 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good lemon |
Reviewed By: Rowinr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2012 06:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far hope to see more then one girl as time goes on like how chapter 1 had nabiki as well great so far. |
Reviewed By: Joe32 On: May 24, 2012 02:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, hope you take the time to finish this one up, though maybe ranma will stay a slave this time? |
Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2012 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hadn't noticed you posted the story here too. I really love it, but I hope that just like in Bunny's Delight Ranma will be able to turn the tables on hs captors. I'm especially happy thta Nabiki got caught. I hope there'll be a lot of humiliation for her to come. |
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2012 02:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm so glad that you are back. Enjoyment Factor is so loy because of 'mindfucking Ranma' though that is only the first Chapter and Ranma enjoyed herself there at least. Must have been some gruesome film there for that happening. I hope that Ranma gets back at them sooo much as well that you continue your other Ranma fanfics. Especially 'Playing with Ranma' and 'Princess of the Moon'. Please update soon!!! |
Title: Great
Reviewed By: Rowinx On: May 16, 2012 23:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to the story their havent been enough ranma stories released lately. |
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