| "Willing Slave II -- Corazon" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwww!!! The ending was perfect!! *Is teary* I'm sad that such a good epic is over at last, and I was so hoping that there'd be more! Oh well! All good stories must end... *sniff* |
Reviewed By: lime On: April 03, 2003 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Sugoi!! i love your writing, please update soon ^.~ |
Reviewed By: chaotic kitty On: March 22, 2003 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!! No cliffhangers, this is getting good.. by the way how's the group therepy going with the boys?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Zslyth On: March 09, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the rating run as 10 as the highest, right?
anywho....
****
Duo could feel it coming, just as he could feel everything in the room for a moment, but he only had the strength to stop three swords. He tensed and thanked God for the veil that hid his wince. "Wufei!"
Wufei shouted.
Duo fell.
*****
~glare~
~glare~
you just had to stop there, didn't you?
~glare~
i've been reading your story since 1030 last night, stopped at 1 this morning to sleep a little, and continued to read at 10 am. and you STOPED!!!
~Heero death glare~
*what she is trying to say is that she wants you to continue the story. she really like it!!! so more please before she goes crazy(er)*
~boinks voice~
shut up. but he's right...more? please? soooooooon? |
Reviewed By: star On: January 07, 2003 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more I really need to know what happens please!!! I can't take the not knowing much longer!!! |
Reviewed By: Chii On: November 18, 2002 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Willing Slave and I loved it! Please post the next part of this story soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ari Maxwell On: November 17, 2002 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
When are you going to be updating?!? And Matiemeais script is actually a lot diffrent then yours, i should know, i memorized the hole movie, expecialy her and relena's part. i love that part!!^-^ |
Reviewed By: Someone On: October 30, 2002 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Be nice. Now, we've had a lot of yaoi, and hints at yuri. C'mon, I think it would be cool to have some Relena+Dorthy action. Or Sally and Une. Pleaseeeeee!!!!!!!! I'll give you a cool idea: Duo is has powers, maybe he's related to wufei, if only distantly? |
Reviewed By: Lemon Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 07:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil, evil kitty cat! To leave us all hanging like that!! *_* I just got through re-reading Willing Slave (yes, all of it) and now I'm ready to read the sequel!! You have to write more soon!! I can't stand not knowing what will happen to Duo!! *sigh* Yes, I know real life gets in the way of writing. It happens to me, too. So I'm going to try and be patient... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 26, 2002 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY THE BEST I JUST WISH THE AUTHER WOULD COTINUE PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Grevola [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Both the first, and the sequal. I'm glad that I will be able to continue reading it!
I just wanted to say that Treiz makes a cute panda, and your characters are wonderful as usual.
Grevola aka G'Vola |
Reviewed By: Nitelyfe On: September 13, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you integrated the elements of the series with your own world here. I've been waiting for the sequel for ages and ages and I'm thrilled with with what you have so far. Course, if the next chapter doesn't come out soon enough, we'll have to release the rabid pikachus to go after you. ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
more soon KC or do you want me to use this paddle I have?! |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: August 13, 2002 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, forget whatever I said about having a short sequel. This series is too good to just wrap up in a few pages.
Anyhow, great start! Hope to see more soon. Very soon. |
Reviewed By: Dazzler On: August 12, 2002 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! you scared me with that saiyan stuff at the beginning! Great, you finally got the sequel out! I'm not a big fan of 13x5,actually, I can barely stand it, but I love the chemistry between Wufei and Treize the way you write those two, they seem perfect together. You have great writing talent and a great ability to give depth to characters, even ones that I could care less about. Will you ever write more about Treize, Zechs, and Noin's past? Well, I bothered you enough. Oh! you should keep the interaction you have with the characters at the beginning. It's funny just write more Treize and Zechs in the opening dialogue. |
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