| "Willing Slave II -- Corazon" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lemon Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 07:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil, evil kitty cat! To leave us all hanging like that!! *_* I just got through re-reading Willing Slave (yes, all of it) and now I'm ready to read the sequel!! You have to write more soon!! I can't stand not knowing what will happen to Duo!! *sigh* Yes, I know real life gets in the way of writing. It happens to me, too. So I'm going to try and be patient... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 26, 2002 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY THE BEST I JUST WISH THE AUTHER WOULD COTINUE PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Grevola [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Both the first, and the sequal. I'm glad that I will be able to continue reading it!
I just wanted to say that Treiz makes a cute panda, and your characters are wonderful as usual.
Grevola aka G'Vola |
Reviewed By: Nitelyfe On: September 13, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you integrated the elements of the series with your own world here. I've been waiting for the sequel for ages and ages and I'm thrilled with with what you have so far. Course, if the next chapter doesn't come out soon enough, we'll have to release the rabid pikachus to go after you. ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
more soon KC or do you want me to use this paddle I have?! |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: August 13, 2002 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, forget whatever I said about having a short sequel. This series is too good to just wrap up in a few pages.
Anyhow, great start! Hope to see more soon. Very soon. |
Reviewed By: Dazzler On: August 12, 2002 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! you scared me with that saiyan stuff at the beginning! Great, you finally got the sequel out! I'm not a big fan of 13x5,actually, I can barely stand it, but I love the chemistry between Wufei and Treize the way you write those two, they seem perfect together. You have great writing talent and a great ability to give depth to characters, even ones that I could care less about. Will you ever write more about Treize, Zechs, and Noin's past? Well, I bothered you enough. Oh! you should keep the interaction you have with the characters at the beginning. It's funny just write more Treize and Zechs in the opening dialogue. |
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