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Reviewed By: Angela On: January 17, 2004 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! never again will I read a more moving piece of writing than this. It fits perfectly into the storyline and makes perfect sense. I truly believe this is what could of happened. By using real situations in the series, its hard to belive whats real and whats not! The uniqueness of the writing style is INdescribable. The way you switch from each characters thought is amazing. It's never out of character at all!! Only, I think the whole Bulma/Vegeta pair is unlikly entirely but no one has ever written such a realistic story as this. I REALLY hope you will make a sequel and SOON! Best of luck AnGeLA
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Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 08, 2002 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. You put such feeling into the fic including the bonds which is a secret love of mine in b/v fanfics. Also when you kept to the timeline you explained the time frame in extreme detail with emotion from the three main characters Future Trunks, Vegeta and Bulma. Overall an acutely enjoyable fic. so please keep up the good work in any other writings you've done.
Oh, by the way I congratulate you on your use of words and terrific spelling and grammar. |
Reviewed By: christabveleve On: August 16, 2002 23:32 EDT
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Wow, double wow, I loved the story. |
Reviewed By: christabveleve On: August 16, 2002 23:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, double wow, I loved the story. |
Reviewed By: aiko On: August 16, 2002 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best B/V fanfics i have read. i love how you kept bulma's and vegeta's character in line to what the anime shows
it's a shame that not a lot of other people have read this. to make it easier to find, i suggest that you say that this is a dragonballz fanfic where it says anime: |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that this is an amazing fic and it's among my favorites. I wish I could write like that! Anyway, write more please!!! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!!! Every well written. I'm looking forward to the sequel!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: April 10, 2002 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was prehaps the most "realistic" V&B get togther fanfic I've ever read! well done, I like how you didn't change his character, and kept Bulma strong willed too :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 04, 2002 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The entire story was a work of art. The ending was absolutely beautiful. Bravo!!! |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 03:14 EST
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Well what can i say...? I'm utterly speechless... that was just so beautiful, and the perfect end to a fantastic story! Throughout the whole i haven't had a fault to find. You truely are an outstanding author! The emotions that you creat are only seconded by the ability you have to keep Vegeta plastered so firmly in character! Congrats on an absolutely breathtakingly amazing story. |
Reviewed By: Webmistress Saijin Bulma On: February 24, 2002 18:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! I am even posting it on my website, so if you want to see it there, come to www.vegetalovesbulma.homestead.com/frontpage.html
Sango is an awsome author! (She follows Vegeta's character so well!) |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: January 16, 2002 07:09 EST
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I'm such a dumb ass! I've read this story SOOO long ago, and also on another site too - i can't believe i never told you how good it was! it's truly inspirational in the sense that the two remained true to their characters! i loved it so much, im waiting with open arms for something new of yours! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 15, 2002 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly one of the best B/V fics that I've ever read. It feels like this is how it happened on the show, loaded with enough angst to send you to see a therapist. Bravo and I hope to be reading the next chapter soon. Peace, |
Reviewed By: missmagick On: September 15, 2001 08:31 EDT
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i love this story so many just have Vegeta falling in love with bulma straight away but i don't think he was brought up that way i think this story is more realistic and i hope to see the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime - bunny On: November 10, 2001 20:43 EST
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Great Story!! I love it so far!! Can't wait to read more ;) One of the best B/V ficcies I've read to date :) |
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