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| "Forgotten Anamnesis" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Title: INCREDIBLE!
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2024 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just incredible from start to finish. I absolutely love
your style of writing and how detailed you are as well. I have read
some fics where one of them loses their memory, but I haven't read
a single one, besides yours, where they *both* lose their memories.
How amazingly written this was to have them go through the motions
purely on instinct, and the fact that they just knew it in their
hearts that they were meant to be together... I don't have many
words to explain how much I enjoyed this journey, other than to
just give you a round of applause. LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!! Never stop
writing. You are so wonderfully creative. ❤️❣️❤️
| Reviewed By: PrincessPestilence On: August 21, 2018 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So like, I know it's 2018, and I haven't read Inu-Yasha fanfics
for, what, a decade? But I got the urge the other day and decided
to hit up my old haunting ground here on mm.org and so I've been
reading through all the popular fics i didnt already read in middle
school, which mostly means reading everything you've ever written.
I've already read a few these last couple of days, not to mention
some I have had bookmarked for however long, like 12 years but I
especially loved this one and I thought it warranted a review. I
LOVE the way that you seemingly systematically addressed and
corrected all the dumb clichés and tropes that don't
logically make any sense. I especially loved the fact that you
addressed the issue about Inuyasha and Kikyou's plan to use the
Jewel to make Inuyasha a human actually might not be all that
"selfless" of a wish. I've thought about that a lot, but I don't
think I've EVER read about it in a fic or heard anyone else address
the issue. Overall, I just think this fic is great and you're great
and I'm going to continue reading the rest of your stories
| Reviewed By: nowherekid85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2015 11:42 PST
Comment/Review:
What an amazing story. I love the way you write and how you really
get into the character's heads so well. Not to mention that lemon
was soooo beautifully done and very hot. I need to go through and
read more of your stories-this is only the second one I've read so
far.
| Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2013 07:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) Well, you've done it again! :D I'm really looking forward to your next fic or update! I've never even CONSIDERED Inuyasha and Kagome in that kind of situation, but it was an amazing story, as all of your fics are! Keep up the good work! | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2013 18:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.fav.cc/nominations/current-nominees/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2013 18:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow...that was a great lemon! Maybe it's because it's been so long since I read one, but...damn! Need. Cold. Shower. LOL. Seriously though, as you know I'm a sucker for the emotional stuff too. But you didn't overdo it; this had an awesome balance between the hotness and the "love" aspect. You dream of them being this open about their feelings, but in most cases it's not realistic at all. Yet, your underlying premise for this story makes it completely believable, and maybe even more special because they don't have memories to go on. They're just acting on their hearts and souls. You've successfully given the romantic in me a major hard-on (and we won't discuss any other hard-ons that I may or may not have). LOL. | Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2013 19:35 PDT
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This chapter was really good. I like the battle scene, especially the little mexican standoff they had going for awhile. It's challenging to write a battle scene that's as complex as this one is, so well done. I can also tell that you put a lot of thought into what memories they would forget, and what information they would retain. It all makes perfect sense to me. If I could make one criticism, it would be that the "explanatory" sections of the story dragged a little. Especially in chapter 1 where you're discussing all their feelings for each other. I realize all that is important, but maybe it could've been condensed somewhat. Not a big deal. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. | Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2013 00:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always love to see that you've posted something new and this story doesn't disappoint! I love the original plot and how you really delved into how each person truly felt and what their thought process along the way was. I also thought it was beautifully written and very believable in the Inuyasha world. Another great fanfic by one of my favorite authors! ;) | Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2013 15:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I've been reading this non stop even staying up when I've been dying to sleep xD Since I got the notifivcation that it had been publisehd xD But this is really one of the best fics that I've read!!! Really it's just wonderful exquisite amazing!!! The very way you're writen everything with such details and so deep oh so very emotional too xD I just love it!!! I can't stop being happy about it, I has a great context, a VERY excelent lemon, and a sweet very detailed end, everything it's pecfet, I don't think I could have been better. Really and it's sooo long and perfect at the same time I truly consider this kind of a book really, an Inuyasha book xD I love it I love it I love it xD I love your work but I think this is going to be one of the top 5 fics now xD really is amazing xD I re-read your fics from tiem to time, reacently "Sacrificial hanyou" and all those others you have with original ideas, it's really amazing xD I can't stop saying just how wonderful your work is and how this fic it's absolutely amazing xD Well tons and tons of good luck xD Take care and I'll be looking forward yo reading more of your work in the future and mean time I'll wait re-reading this xD Really you've don an espectacular work xD ahhh and by the way the other review I left i did it as Eiko 007 cuz I was doing it from my iTouch and it wasn't letting me log it xD Well best wished good luck byebye matta ne xD Gambateeeee!!! | Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko 007 On: February 02, 2013 15:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I've been following u for a long time now xD I live you're fics and when I got the notification about this one I got really happy xD I love the way you've described everything how you've got into every little detail and how you went about the Kikyo issue xD I do hate her but I know Inuyasha doesn't xD sooo what can we do??? xD well thanks for sharing this with us I felt so very reading an Inuyasha book xD really great xD well going to the next chapter xD |
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